Dreams, Sweet

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o there's a twilight magic in the mist it floats between the eventide and dawn attending winds of fancy, heaven-kissed that billow with sweet breaths of Avalon awaiting on a hope 'til gloaming's gone a sea of suns to cast your dreams upon ... o there is an enchantment in the night that dances with dark charm and reverie it holds all yearnings in its bosom, bright and waits for your desires to set them free to plumb the inky depths of midnight sea and loose your sleep's imaginings-to-be ... o there are wonders in the evening air thus brought to full fruition in your sleep all spun to threads of artfulness and care and woven into wishes, grand and deep a tapestry of moonbeams meant to keep the secrets of the twilight in its creep ... and all the souls who tend that great expanse ... will see to your sweet dreaming as they dance!

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Robert Lindley

Date: 3/15/2021 2:15:00 AM

My friend, you are without any doubt truly a poet's poet. This magnificent creation proves that truth a hundredfold over and then some! I simply must say every verse in this one is of the very highest poetic caliber. Shakespeare would indeed be envious of this creation, imho. A fav- a golden classic surely this will one day be seen to be.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/14/2021 7:06:00 AM

Congrats on your winning work in Brian's contest. Way to go. Sara

P.S. Awtry

Date: 3/12/2021 10:14:00 PM

Gorgeous! I especially liked "a sea of suns to cast your dreams upon" and "a tapestry of moonbeams." I am FAVing this one to visit it again. Thank you for sharing your talents. :)