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Dreams of Visions

"dreams of visions"

once suns rose and moons beamed
our names called to one another
whispering desires and love

suddenly when lights dimmed
calling you to home of heaven
my heart missed a beat

now within dreams of visions
with ears and eyes wide open
such senses are achingly alive

I see you I hear you I feel you
separated by dimensions apart
still whispers of our names call

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09-10-23

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Susan Lawrence Date: 9/23/2023 2:35:00 PM Just beautiful Lisa …. Awesome mysterious and so emotional . I could feel the different dimensions and the whispers. Hugs, Susan :) Login to Reply Lisa Ricci Date: 10/3/2023 5:33:00 AM Good Morning Susan. Thank you very much. I am honored by your commentary. Truly. I look forward to turning to your page soon. I'm so sorry for this late response.

Paul Bell Date: 9/18/2023 3:00:00 AM Great write, Lisa. Loved ones go, but still stay around, and at times we still talk to them, which I definitely approve off. I usually bitch to my older brother when things don't go right, even though I know he's laughing at me. Login to Reply Lisa Ricci Date: 10/3/2023 5:35:00 AM Good Morning Paul. Hi. Yes, loved ones do stay around. Thank you ever so much. I thank you also for such generosity to which I do not take for granted. I'm sorry for this late response. May this day find you well. I will see you on your page soon. Blessings (smile)

Christina Bowring Date: 9/17/2023 3:17:00 PM Love this beautifully, so well written poem dear Lisa. ‘once suns rose and moons beamed’. ‘Now within dreams of visions’, So creative. Like Robert said, the last stanza is truly wonderful especially the very last line. So enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. Hugs and smiles to you. Have a great week. Xx :):) Login to Reply Lisa Ricci Date: 10/3/2023 5:37:00 AM Hello Christina. Good Morning. It is I who thanks you. Truly. I do not take your generosity for granted. May this day find you well. Have a great morning. Blessings always (smile)

Robert Lindley Date: 9/15/2023 5:17:00 AM This my friend is indeed a beautiful new creation. Closing stanza is golden. A definitive fav for me. God bless you.. Login to Reply Lisa Ricci Date: 10/3/2023 5:39:00 AM Good Morning Robert. Hi. I am so very sorry for this late response. I am beyond honored by your review and comments. Truly. Thank you. Thank you. May this day find you well. I will see you on your page soon. Blessings always (smile)

Yolanda Nicholsen Date: 9/12/2023 3:22:00 AM beautifully expressed adorable piece. Login to Reply Lisa Ricci Date: 9/13/2023 5:41:00 AM Good Morning Yolanda. Thank you very much. Have a wonderful day. Take Care (smile)

Victor Buhagiar Date: 9/11/2023 3:03:00 AM Lost love? Or hard to find. An enigmatic poem that deserves great consideration. Hugs. Login to Reply Lisa Ricci Date: 9/13/2023 5:49:00 AM Oh my goodness Victor. Good Afternoon. I am speechless. Thank you ever so much. I do not take your visits or commentary for granted and I am honored by your commentary. Truly. Thank you. Have a wonderful afternoon. Love Peace and Blessings now and always,,, (smiles always too)

Bill Baker Date: 9/10/2023 10:20:00 AM Love in the Spirit in much better than just in the physical. Enticing poetry, Lisa. To Love beyond the limits of this world, bliss. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us through your lovely poetry, my friend. Have a glorious day! Bill Login to Reply Lisa Ricci Date: 9/13/2023 5:47:00 AM Hello Bill. Good Morning. I'm so sorry for this late response. It is I who thanks you for always sharing your graciousness and generosity to which I never take for granted. Truly. Thank you. I agree with your intake and commentary of spirit and physical. Have a wonderful morning and day. Peace and Blessings to you and Sara. (smile smile smile)