Dreams:

Fragile to the touch,
Like a rainbow in the sky,
When you dream, you live,
In the heart of the sacred,
Let your dreams carry you off.

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Reason A. Poteet

April 15, 2017 at 1:02 PM

Spiritual thoughts here, I like the comparison of dreams to rainbows. Congratulations, White Wolf, well done

Andrea Dietrich

April 14, 2017 at 7:22 PM

hey we both placed. I am SO Happy and to see yours again. It's wonderful!!

White Wolf

April 15, 2017 at 3:18 AM

Yes it is, Andrea! /|\

Lisa Ricci

April 12, 2017 at 4:56 AM

Top of the Day to you White Wolf. Allow me to say Yes Yes and Yes. I am the forever dreamer and I love this in every way. Well done in theme words and format.

White Wolf

April 12, 2017 at 11:51 PM

Thank you, Lisa /|\

Sara Ella

April 12, 2017 at 1:10 AM

Dreams are so important - this is a wonderful poem Budgie. It is an inspiration :)

White Wolf

April 12, 2017 at 1:13 AM

I agree totally with you on that, Sara! I actually did this for a contest, so crossed fingers! And thanks /|\

Andrea Dietrich

April 11, 2017 at 6:24 PM

This is so nice. I wish he would give lots of wins. I am seeing so many wonderful tanka poems.

White Wolf

April 11, 2017 at 6:54 PM

Haha, if I just got a placement I would be happy! Thank you, Andrea /|\

Probir Gupta

April 11, 2017 at 10:35 AM

A touch of surreal ...

White Wolf

April 11, 2017 at 6:53 PM

Thank you very much, Probir /|\

Chris Green

April 11, 2017 at 7:28 AM

Absolutely beautiful and mesmerizing ink my friend. This one touches the heart.

White Wolf

April 11, 2017 at 6:52 PM

Thanks, Chris! /|\

Demetrios Trifiatis

April 11, 2017 at 2:40 AM

Heavenly my friend, WW. A 7.

White Wolf

April 11, 2017 at 2:43 AM

Thank you, Demetrios. Enjoy your day mate! /|\

Darren White

April 11, 2017 at 1:11 AM

Those opening two lines, are of absolute beauty, and I love your tanka. Great pen my friend!

White Wolf

April 11, 2017 at 1:15 AM

Thanks, Duir! Great to hear you are home again my friend /|\

Vladislav Raven

April 11, 2017 at 12:07 AM

Hi White Wolf. Your pen does sing as i read this on this early morning. The Tanka seems to be another form that i am getting fond of. Your content in this Tanka is excellent as is the poetic lines you use to form your vision. I was indeed hooked when i did read the title. Your words do make the dream come alive. May your pen ever run gold. This has to be a seven and a fave. Your friend always....mike.

White Wolf

April 11, 2017 at 12:10 AM

Great timing Mike! I just finished reading your own work! And am in awe! Thank you for reading my friend /|\