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I was running through a field early one day Naked as the day that I was born. I came upon a beautiful lake It called to me, I could have sworn. Come enter me my pretty maid, I will wrap myself round you. I stopped just for a second, Before I entered the water and flew. I didn’t know that I could fly, it was so exhilarating, I swooped around with the birds, they said they were migrating. I landed on the ground, but my feet sunk in the earth, I found I went underground, this now filled me with mirth. I wiggled my hips so sensuously, and moved fast in twists and turns. I came to the surface and looking at me, and found I was a worm. I was getting puzzled now, what was happening to me? I could fly and wiggle and move about, oh so sexily. I felt all warm but naked, and wondered if this is me. But I rely liked everything, all I could do and see. But to what avail, I asked myself, why am I like this? I turned around and heard a sigh, as he woke me with a kiss. My dreams was over, even though, it had been so much fun But nothing is quite like this feeling; I get with my sexy man.
20/01/2012

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Date: 3/17/2013 9:14:00 PM
Dear Mandy, One minute I'm running, swimming, flying and wiggling with YOU, the next I'm flying into the water, swimming, wiggling and trying to get off this hook; when a largemouth Bass takes a long look; opens his mouth and I'm being... Superb Write. I felt it I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Brother...Harry
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Date: 3/17/2013 9:20:00 PM
Dear Sis, Congratulations on YOUR POEM "Dreams" getting a well deserved Win in PD's Contest. LOVE ALWAYS...Harry
Date: 2/21/2012 8:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in ~P.D.'s~ "The Dreams" contest Mandy. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/20/2012 4:49:00 PM
Mandy, I also had a dream about a naked woman running through a field. I had no idea that was you, I should have landed my flying goat and said Hi. My loss. :-). Seriously, This is a wonderful poem, I really liked it. I may just read it again....and again....LOL. Well done. Congrats on making PD's winners' list....................S.Ronthorpe
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 2/21/2012 12:09:00 AM
Hi Samual I wondered who it was flying that acrobatic goat, never mind next time hey xx
Date: 2/20/2012 12:26:00 PM
Congrats on your win in the contest Mandy.
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 2/20/2012 1:05:00 PM
Thank you Jonas and for reading and taking the time to comment xx
Date: 2/20/2012 12:11:00 PM
Well done in this Competition. your Man is very lucky! Best wishes. Charles.
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 2/20/2012 1:06:00 PM
He certainly is, thanks Charles xx
Date: 2/20/2012 4:18:00 AM
great poetry Mandy, perhaps you linked with different life forms in your dream? anything is possible... but you are taken and have a guy hehe great poem ...
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 2/20/2012 4:23:00 AM
Thanks don appreciate that xx
Date: 2/19/2012 9:27:00 PM
dongrats Mandy on a great win for this dreamy delight poetry luv..
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 2/20/2012 3:48:00 AM
Thank you Linda Marie xx
Date: 2/19/2012 7:55:00 PM
MANDY.. CONGRATUALTIONS! with your wonderful dreamy poem... thank you for supporting my contest ;-) ~ always*PD
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 2/20/2012 3:49:00 AM
Always fun pd xx
Date: 2/5/2012 7:26:00 PM
Absolutely love this...places this reader in the scene...or rather watching the scene lol...Enjoyed !!!!
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Date: 2/20/2012 3:49:00 AM
Awh thanks Debra xx
Date: 1/22/2012 8:18:00 AM
so picturesque and dreamy, mandy.. now. let's get that man!...:) best of winning luck!..:) huggs!
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 1/30/2012 2:42:00 AM
Thanks nette and for the placement in your contest,its belated I know. x
Date: 1/21/2012 2:32:00 PM
this poem would make a brilliant movie, the imagery, sheer magic. harry
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 1/30/2012 2:42:00 AM
Thanks Harry glad you like it x
Date: 1/21/2012 2:23:00 AM
I love a good dream. Thanks x
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Date: 1/20/2012 7:51:00 PM
Anybody can have dreams, but they still don't beat reality. This was a good way to describe your dream.
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 1/21/2012 2:25:00 AM
Thanks Bob put my comment in wrong box before. Sat at airport waiting to start my holiday.x
Date: 1/20/2012 6:04:00 PM
Oh, to have dreams like that one. Very creative write Mandy.
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 1/21/2012 2:24:00 AM
Thanks Elizabeth x
Date: 1/20/2012 4:48:00 PM
Sounds like a wonderful dream. Very nive write, Greg
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 1/21/2012 2:26:00 AM
Thanks Greg I do have good ones x
Date: 1/20/2012 8:14:00 AM
Loved every word Mandy what a great write ,Hugs and best wishes your friend always Declan xxx
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 1/21/2012 2:26:00 AM
Thanks Decxxx
Date: 1/20/2012 8:11:00 AM
Loved reading your amazing poetry this morning Mandy. I hope you have a wonderful inspiration filled weekend. I will be back Monday to see if you have written anything new. Love, Carol
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 1/20/2012 8:14:00 AM
Thanks Carol I hope to gain new inspiration on holiday from saturday.xx

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