Dream World

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trapped in open we are free within surely, we are dreaming? 25-April-2021

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/26/2021 5:02:00 PM

Interesting scenario and question there, Seeker. The mind is a powerful tool. :) gw

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 4/26/2021 10:59:00 PM

Attachment presupposes separation. A dream, an illusion, if all be one.

John Fleming

Date: 4/26/2021 1:06:00 AM

Intriguing! Thought compelling to say the very least. Enjoyed! My best regards. :) john P.s Your poetry and remarks have a familiar flavour. I wonder?

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 4/26/2021 1:14:00 AM

familiar fragrance? have we, hand in hand, walked these paths before?

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/25/2021 7:31:00 AM

Interesting. Freedom is not contingent on location but rather on mindset.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 4/25/2021 9:11:00 AM

Yes. The inquiry prompt is metaphoric.

Jack Horne

Date: 4/25/2021 6:53:00 AM

thoughtful write here

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 4/25/2021 9:12:00 AM

Thank you, Jack!