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This opalescent symphonic drop Holds my chilled core tightly. It slices my soul eerily. In a cluster of broken gems The purity of the situation is shattered. My heuristics have black blood. I turn frozen words into stone metaphors. It is necessary to line up stimulating techniques. It's like looking into the middle of a slumbering dream. Dull stars and scattered dust. To see his sleepy dreams. In the place of scattered debris. On a dark night with no moon or stars.
Written: January 27, 2023

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Date: 2/28/2023 11:09:00 AM
All your work is so good!! Loved this piece!
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Date: 1/28/2023 7:07:00 AM
No moon and no stars in our evenings what a dark world it would be … Great poem Lasaad! Debx
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Date: 1/27/2023 11:28:00 PM
Quite a dark verse Lasaad, a permanent dark sky doesn't bear thinking about. Hope you're keeping well. Have an enjoyable weekend. Tom
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Date: 1/27/2023 9:34:00 PM
Could be a nightmare to dream of a sky with no stars.
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