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Dream Stars

This opalescent symphonic drop Holds my chilled core tightly. It slices my soul eerily. In a cluster of broken gems The purity of the situation is shattered. My heuristics have black blood. I turn frozen words into stone metaphors. It is necessary to line up stimulating techniques. It's like looking into the middle of a slumbering dream. Dull stars and scattered dust. To see his sleepy dreams. In the place of scattered debris. On a dark night with no moon or stars.
Written: January 27, 2023
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Hind Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 11:09 AM
All your work is so good!! Loved this piece!
M  Avatar
January 28, 2023 at 7:07 AM
No moon and no stars in our evenings what a dark world it would be … Great poem Lasaad! Debx
Cunningham Avatar
January 27, 2023 at 11:28 PM
Quite a dark verse Lasaad, a permanent dark sky doesn't bear thinking about. Hope you're keeping well. Have an enjoyable weekend. Tom
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January 27, 2023 at 9:34 PM
Could be a nightmare to dream of a sky with no stars.
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