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Dream

The way you kiss It makes me sad Pure and innocent like a relationship i've never had You could be a liar, or playing pretend And i know that you're poor heart is still on the mend But you grabbed me And desire seeped out of my old soul I felt it was the last time we'd ever embrace and the way you kiss made my thoughts race I thought of what i was missing long before we started kissing About what i deserved, tolerated and settled for in the past Before, i was so young and just wanted A fleeting feeling to last The way you kiss it boggles my mind the backstabbers and snakes i leave them behind I cant be cocky, i cant brag or boast Because i cant find the words to whisper in your ear i cant touch you, or play coy games when you're near A great transformation, A journey of some kind Or perhaps its all a dream in my mind.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/6/2013 5:21:00 PM
Great write, Maz. You personified the meaning of a kiss with such subtlety. Please visit more often.
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Date: 12/6/2013 12:53:00 PM
Beautiful Poem! You may be interested in my poems I hope you enjoy. Also, my friend and I just started our own website you may be interested.. WanderingWriters.com
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Date: 12/6/2013 10:16:00 AM
† Listening To Billy Idol's Song, Eyes Without A Face: Hanging Out By The State Line Turning Old Damn Water, Into Wine ˜ When Worlds Collide, Tis The Thought We Find, When Viewing Your Beauty's, Wonderful Feature ˜ You Are Beautiful Congratulations And, Welcome, To Her Loving PoetrySoup ˜ Happy Holidays ˜ Love John
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Date: 11/19/2013 11:04:00 PM
Ashley, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Ashley Gleason
Date: 11/20/2013 7:09:00 PM
Thanks so much for the comment, i have never shared my poems with an audience before. Your Made in China is awesome! -Ash or **Mazz :)
Date: 11/17/2013 6:13:00 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Ashley! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/17/2013 2:02:00 AM
Ashley, wow.. on the imagery you left behind... deep... , I like your first poetic piece on the site , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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