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the forest is lush green and dripping of moss and a flowing stream meanders and wildflowers drop their petals into the flow where they drift down a waterfall into a deep blue lake I listen deeply to the melody of the rippling water kissing the wet rocks along the way and within the forest there is chirping and a sigh then, I hear my name in a whisper it is faint and seems to be coming from faraway it flutters in the tangled trees and floats on the wind and I run seeking but soon I am lost in the vast dark forest and the dream becomes a maze of trees and clinging vines reaching out and then ... the dream withers away ________________ May 20, 2021 Poetry/Verse/dream Copyright Protected, ID 05-1356-967-20 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the contest, All Yours (May 21) sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 05/21/2021 First Place

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Date: 5/22/2021 2:31:00 AM
Being lost in a vast forest in the dark would be a very scary experience. I have been lost while hiking in a forest, but thankfully it was daylight. I had my sister and cousin along so it wasn’t that bad, but thinking of the scolding we would get kept us fearful. I enjoyed your poem that is so filled with lovely imagery Constance. Congratulations on your first placement! Blessings, Connie xxoo
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Constance La France
Date: 5/22/2021 12:07:00 PM
Connie, thank you for the compliment and comment, and congratulations, it was good I was only lost in a dream, being lost in the forest for real must have been scary, love _Constance
Date: 5/20/2021 1:14:00 PM
Lovely pen Constance, very well penned!
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Date: 5/20/2021 2:25:00 PM
Gordon, thank you so much for the visit and compliment, peace _Constance
Date: 5/20/2021 10:04:00 AM
A Romantic Dream, Indeed!
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Constance La France
Date: 5/20/2021 2:26:00 PM
Christuraj, thanks for the visit and comment, peace _Constance
Date: 5/20/2021 9:34:00 AM
A beautiful, exotic scene you have painted, Constance. Lovely work, indeed.
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Date: 5/20/2021 2:26:00 PM
Milt, thanks so much for the comment and compliment, peace _Constance

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