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Dream-Like Silhouette

There is a mystic hint of endearment In watching you through shadows , Like observing a diaphanous river As it meanders its way down the bend; Past reeds and grasses on a foggy edge To somewhere new and therefore lightly seen. The delicate, steady throb from your glide Moves through cycles of my lulled vision Bringing respite from your otherworld's form Sailing on an air of unconsciousness And pulling that filmy silhouette Down , down to a ripple of celestial dreams . I relish intangible thoughts about you Flowing gently into me. You drift quiet, still : Those ethereal whispers bidding me closer Like the rivulet which beckons Through your movement in it's veiled outline. Silhouette Contest sponsored by Craig Cornish 9/15/2017

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Date: 9/18/2017 9:28:00 PM
Congrats, Nette, on POTD!!
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Date: 9/17/2017 4:46:00 PM
A very charming piece of poetry, Nette...as smooth and as unruffled as the gliding waters of your "Diaphanous river" -- most elegant! My very warmest regards as always. :) john
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Date: 9/17/2017 4:46:00 PM
A very charming piece of poetry, Nette...as smooth and as unruffled as the gliding waters of your "Diaphanous river" -- most elegant! My very warmest regards as always. :) john
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Date: 9/16/2017 7:20:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD :) Eve ~`*
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Date: 9/16/2017 7:13:00 PM
The poem is fabulous, congratulations on your awesome win, Nette ... Eve ~`*
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Date: 9/16/2017 5:15:00 PM
Nette congratulations on your win in the contest with this outstanding write
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Date: 9/16/2017 1:13:00 PM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. Nette !!!
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Date: 9/16/2017 12:36:00 PM
Your words flow so easily Nette that I almost see you existing in this world wonderfully dreamy and flowing peacefully. There were inspired writes, yours among them as always.
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Date: 9/16/2017 12:11:00 PM
I looked for another word to describe this, Nette, but "Beautiful" it is and "Lovely," too. "I relish intangible thoughts about you flowing gently into me."
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Date: 9/16/2017 10:52:00 AM
Words crafted with beauty and grace. A truly gifted write. Deserving to be in this place. Congratulations.
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Date: 9/16/2017 8:55:00 AM
Great poem indeed
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Date: 9/16/2017 7:53:00 AM
Your words are so very lovely Nette, they flow like lyrics. Congratulations for POTD honors, well derived...
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Date: 9/16/2017 7:41:00 AM
Very beautifully crafted nette congrats on POTD:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/16/2017 7:17:00 AM
Truly amazing write Nette, so deserving of POTD. Good luck in the contest, a winner in my eyes already....Maria xx
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Date: 9/16/2017 7:13:00 AM
WOWZA...what a way to open the day. A cup of Joe and a silhouetted dream. Way to go Nette!!!!
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Date: 9/16/2017 7:08:00 AM
Wonderful piece Nette, dreamy, you got my vote :)
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Date: 9/16/2017 5:47:00 AM
Returning with Congrats nette!
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Date: 9/15/2017 7:12:00 AM
- Oh Nette, delicate and beautiful - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/14/2017 10:50:00 PM
Beautifully stated my friend...a dreamy Silhouette for sure...a winner in my court...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 9/14/2017 9:02:00 PM
Your words flow like a waterfall and description leaves me standing in the middle admiring . Good luck in the contest... Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 9/14/2017 8:01:00 PM
Beautiful words carefully crafted as always--lovely poem nette!
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Date: 9/14/2017 7:29:00 PM
Every carefully chosen word of every artistically written line is pure poetic bliss. Your poem is the perfect expression of your title - quite lovely and beautiful Nette. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 9/14/2017 4:16:00 PM
the picture painted here was like looking through a veil tethered to a dream..good luck
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Date: 9/14/2017 2:59:00 PM
This is gorgeous, quite the masterful write here my friend! I surely enjoyed reading your creative and gentle poem here this afternoon. This poem in of itself is a delicate piece, a delightful write to have been expressed so perfectly! Great Work!!
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