Drag

What of quirks and a flaw or two? No good but a work of art I think that is my main draw for you You may drift away, til far apart No good but a work of art Now drifting still, but towards You may drift away, til far apart Til I pull you in with out of sight cords Now drifting still, but towards As moonstruck surf to coast Til I pull you in with out of sight cords Was always drawn back, almost As moonstruck surf to coast I think that is my main draw for you Was always drawn back, almost What of quirks and a flaw or two? Sponsored by: Emile Pinet Written: 1st Jan 2023 Lipogram poetry contest

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Emile Pinet

Date: 1/31/2023 11:18:00 AM

Congratulations Dilly! Your poem "Drag", has earned you a distinguished place in my “Lipogram” poetry contest. I was very strict; and yet, your poem earned a place on the winners list my friend, Emile.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 1/31/2023 1:03:00 PM

Many thanks