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Down with Put-Downs

Handing me his laptop my older brother Ray says: “Hey, look at this!” The screen goes black so he mutters: “What'd y'do now? Here, give it back.” He fiddles with something. My back hears his cold hint from the door - “Just look at the picture, DON'T touch the screen.” But… I’ve walked away without a word, thereby leaving his put-down where it belongs in his lap. Took me a long time to learn I don’t have to listen to arrogance or condescension. I’ve learned to put down put-downs with ease. Why wait for the name-calling like "Ignoramus!" Just ignore Ray. I quietly close the door.

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Date: 12/9/2024 4:01:00 PM
I agree with this poem Reason, well said!
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Date: 11/25/2024 11:28:00 AM
Congratulations Reason! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest. You should be proud of your accomplishment. There were so many good poems submitted, yet your poem caught my eye. Well done, my friend Emile.
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Date: 11/26/2024 5:08:00 AM
I welcome the award, Emile. I'm sure it is never easy to choose the varying degrees of "best" poems considering your open prompt of 18-30 lines in free verse, any theme. I like structure but it does stifle creativity sometimes. Thanks again.

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