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Down Winding Road

As I ventured down the winding road I saw a house with a lawn full of weeds The door was rotting on this ghostly abode Upon neglect its structure feeds The roof was tattered and in distress, The porch seemed ready to collapse, The sight of it did depress Its garden lost to weeds and scraps Curiosity got the better of me, And I opened the old rusty gate Through the rotting portal I walked to see A staircase in a sorry state Through a broken window I saw the backyard Where ferns grew tall along a rickety fence, A fire in the kitchen had left it charred And left it damaged without pretence On the floor, caked in dust, was what seemed to be a rosette Its luster gone, and memory scarred Then ghostly whispers made me fret And I fled the ruins where ghosts now guard 7-14-2020 Decaying House Contest Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 7/27/2020 4:19:00 AM
I could envision the mystery and hollow echoes through your brilliant muse Joseph. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 7/25/2020 9:16:00 AM
Joseph, congratulations on your win in my decaying house contest with this excellent write, a FAV for me _Constance
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Date: 7/22/2020 4:09:00 PM
A great tell-tale write that entertain minds, Joseph, my compliments for your 1st Place win -- Aloha~@William
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Date: 7/22/2020 1:08:00 PM
Wow Joseph! Your descriptive expressions and imagery make this a profound read! Take your line”Upon neglect its structure feeds“ which I found to be brilliant in assessing the ruins of a once lovely home. This is so exquisitely written and so deserving of your first place win! Congratulations my friend. This is one of my favorite entries! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 7/19/2020 9:32:00 PM
Such a sad picture, Joseph, all supported by your detailed imagery - the hair on the back of neck stood on end! Seeing decaying houses tugs at my heart. I want to repair all of them - bring them back to life! Congratulations on your first place win!
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Date: 7/19/2020 2:54:00 PM
such spooky imagery Joseph I would run too!!!many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/18/2020 3:46:00 PM
This is an excellent piece, Joseph--vividly descriptive and moving. Janice
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Date: 7/18/2020 10:49:00 AM
A deserted, run down unkempt home, seems ghostly to me, I would have done the same as you Joseph. Blessings and Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 7/16/2020 5:11:00 PM
Excellent. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it good luck...
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Date: 7/15/2020 2:28:00 PM
I have seen some houses like that--you blended the words seamlessly to tell a cohesive story, Joseph. All the best.
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Date: 7/15/2020 12:45:00 PM
Very descriptive and well written Joseph :)
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Date: 7/15/2020 4:22:00 AM
I like your take on the theme, Joseph, mine is something similar:)
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Date: 7/14/2020 7:44:00 PM
Oh my, is it that time of year already? This spooky tale would be a perfect Halloween story. As soon as you opened the gate- I was ready to leave. :) Just sayin'. ~ Brandy
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Date: 7/14/2020 5:56:00 PM
Hello Joseph May, it must have been a beautiful house in its day. Now the house is dull and needs repairs. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Date: 7/14/2020 12:38:00 PM
Loved your spooky tale Joseph, great use of the allocated words. Good luck in the contest Tom
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