Down the Road

You won't remember that you slept
All curled up on my chest;
Or how you smiled on seeing me,
Which made me feel the best.

The hours that I held you,
Fed you, burped you, changed your clothes
Will surely be forgotten
As they should be, I suppose.

Your babyhood will disappear
Before I've had my fill
And you'll remember none of it
But my sweet boy, I will.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Mehta Avatar
February 9, 2014 at 7:38 AM
Very interesting theme and nice take on it. congrats on the win, ilene
Johnson Avatar
February 8, 2014 at 10:56 AM
this is so right. A mom never forgets. congratulations on your poem and your win. Love, Joyce
Johnson Avatar
February 8, 2014 at 10:56 AM
this is so right. A mom never forgets. congratulations on your poem and your win. Love, Joyce
Bauer Avatar
February 8, 2014 at 7:18 PM
a grandmother doesn't, either! thanks for your comments, joyce - i appreciate it!
Jerden Avatar
February 8, 2014 at 9:23 AM
My wife and I loved this one, Ilene! Such memories, that we're now re-living with our grandchildren (only better in some ways). Congratulations!
Bauer Avatar
February 8, 2014 at 7:13 PM
interestingly, this was written about my grandson, although i agree that being with him brings me back to my own days as a new mom. thanks for commenting!
Kayode Avatar
February 7, 2014 at 12:33 AM
Congrats Ilene for the well deserved win,I have followed your work with zealous attention ;no doubt you are a wonderful poetess.
Bauer Avatar
February 8, 2014 at 7:14 PM
thank you so much for your supportive words. much appreciated!
Johnson Avatar
January 9, 2014 at 3:40 PM
Somehow I think that it's God's grace, these memories we can't replace. And when the road comes back around. We'll understand the love we've found. Peace. :)
Bauer Avatar
February 8, 2014 at 7:14 PM
thanks for another charming rhyming comment, robert! i look forward to reading them...
Richards Avatar
January 2, 2014 at 6:45 PM
Oh goodness..........I feel this one so deeply. I have those same feelings, and know they have no idea how precious their gift to us can be. Sweet sweet poem!
Bauer Avatar
February 8, 2014 at 7:17 PM
thank you, carrie! i appreciate your comments very much and am glad you can relate...
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