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I like to walk the forest, the deep quiet hush heals my soul; except all the bird songs seem to be chorused, I enjoy the concert on my tranquil stroll; and find a hidden trail. The deep green foliage wraps me like a veil, with a scent intoxicating- thirsty I inhale; and walking on and on, oh, I want to walk until the day is gone. Soon- a stream with a white swan, and the babies following her are the dearest; while father floats as if on patrol, around the edge grow the lovely cattail; oh, quiet here comes a fawn . . . ________________________ June 27, 2020 Poetry/Rhyme/Down the Hidden Path Copyright Protected, ID 20- 1263-383-03 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Strand Completely New (1) sponsor, Brian Strand First Place

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Date: 6/29/2020 2:41:00 PM
Witty, beautifully written and with a lot of wisdom. A big big congratulations! Well deserved.
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Date: 6/29/2020 12:18:00 AM
Lush and sumptuous with your depiction of a walk through the forest. Love the rich greens in the photo. Congratulations on your win, Constance ~ John
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Date: 6/28/2020 3:15:00 PM
a dear heart for nature....i think is rather major....because as long as we have been acquainted....it is these Beautiful pictures you have painted....oh how i missed them while i was gone....now inspiration returns so lets continue on....great work my friend....;)
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Date: 6/28/2020 12:01:00 PM
You have made me follow your exquisite path, such loveliness. I too veil by the emerald green forest. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/28/2020 11:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Beautiful. A very healing place. I love your picture. I feel I am waking with your poem. Enjoy your day..........
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Date: 6/28/2020 10:42:00 AM
Congratulations on the win!
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Date: 6/28/2020 7:39:00 AM
Hello, Dear Heart. You've imagined such a tranquil setting, one that I could wander in for hours.
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Date: 6/27/2020 7:05:00 PM
I've been on that path. Enjoyed this one tremendously.
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Date: 6/27/2020 6:46:00 PM
I could feel myself here in your forest...quiet and tranquil.
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Date: 6/27/2020 6:04:00 PM
I will!
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