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Down In the Wet Land

On mornings as cold inside as out__burr She knelt__held a match against fat lighterd For she knew that this was required of her The fire would smoke, sputter__soon blaze occured Spreading rapidly engulfing the wood Seemed like a miracle from where I stood How she went on from year to year__question What could she have been in better situation She would blow the spark that ignited flames Fire would glow as did her small meager life But from her life a blaze planted__child tame Who would write of her hardships being wife And how she would teach where the Sweet Shurbs grow Down in the wet land beside the road (How to appreciate corn bread, buttermilk, and butter cold.)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/31/2010 4:29:00 AM
WONDERFUL SARA. WELL APPRECIATED BY ME. A FINE & LOVELY POEM, AGAIN ENJOY YOUR MEMORIAL DAY,,IRMA
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Date: 5/30/2010 4:39:00 PM
for some reason, this sounds like something tragic of harm to a one self when i read it. as always, very sweet writes..Sara. have yourself a good day. -always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 5/30/2010 8:14:00 AM
Such lovely words Sara and so visual .. see the fire and flame and feel the hardship in the lines written.. luv your last line ..its a gret ending.. luv.. Linda-Marie.. hope u are enjoyng your holiday weekend..
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Date: 5/30/2010 7:37:00 AM
I'd like to share some of that cornbread too, Sara. Thanks for this trip to yesteryear when hardships were a way of life for many people. We forget how easy we have it today. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 5/30/2010 6:46:00 AM
I am there now and sure wish I had a piece of corn beard I have is crackers great write sara hope you enter this in John Hecks contest for this would be a winner thanks for sharing and for your kind comments today going to make that into a song possible pop country
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Date: 5/30/2010 6:36:00 AM
This rhyming pattern is excellent. It moves the poem along in a great way. The message is also excellent. Great job and keep writing. Joseph
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Date: 5/30/2010 6:01:00 AM
Well written and a nice flow Sara.. enjoy holiday weekend..
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Date: 5/30/2010 5:25:00 AM
Yes, I must agree with Dr. Ram, I also enjoyed the thrid stanza of your poem, Sara! Live is never easy! Thank you for commenting "Will-o'-the-Wisps" and keep your creative pen always at flow...Gert
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Date: 5/30/2010 3:42:00 AM
I enjoyed the 3rd stanza of the sonnet. Very meaningful and sad
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