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Down In The Valley

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Down in the lush valley, the river swiftly flows I need to cross over, embrace the mountain, grow On the other side, gold, hurry, swim across fast At the top of the bluff, look far and wide at last On the other side is more high mountains to see How disappointing, dear, no gold anywhere ghee The rainbow disappeared, no humans anywhere near Why this battle to face, reasons are not so clear

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Valsa George

Date: 7/22/2024 10:53:00 PM

Grass is always greener on the other side. So it is natural to have a desire to cross over to the other side. Well composed, dear Sara.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/23/2024 3:55:00 AM

Yes, Valsa. We have a saying here, "The grass is always greener over the septic tank". I appreciate the visit. Sara K

Dr. Padmashree R P

Date: 6/18/2024 8:41:00 AM

Beautiful poem

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/18/2024 11:26:00 AM

Thank you, Dr. I appreciate the visit and nice review of my work. Sara K

Jack Horne

Date: 5/28/2024 7:59:00 AM

love the vivid descriptions in this, my friend

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/28/2024 8:28:00 AM

Your visits are uplifting, Jack. Your time spent here is cherished. Sara K

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/25/2024 2:22:00 AM

A highly great written poem, with incredible imagery and imagination.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/25/2024 2:36:00 AM

Thank you, Victor. I appreciate the visit and time spent here. Sara K

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/21/2024 12:26:00 PM

Dear Sara, your poem demonstrates a high level of poetic brilliance, utilizing excellent metaphors and imagery. I appreciate the way you have crafted vivid imagery throughout the piece, as well as your skillful use of form.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/21/2024 1:33:00 PM

Your visits are always encouraging, Lasaad. Thank you, Sara K

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/21/2024 8:39:00 AM

What we all face…the race…looking for (what?)…climbing the mountain…there must surely be gold…but perhaps, it is not here on earth and we will find the treasure unearthed in heaven. Love this poem, Sara! <3

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/21/2024 1:32:00 PM

You completely understand. Thanks for the nice review, Kim. I appreciate the visit. Sara K

Silent One

Date: 5/21/2024 8:22:00 AM

I like how you created imagery in your poem.. Nice use of form also..

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/21/2024 1:31:00 PM

Why, thank you, SO. I appreciate the nice comments. Sara K