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Double Rainbow

This day may be dark and gray, Unfolding dampness, hour by hour But as I dodge the muddy puddles With reflective thoughts of words so sour, I will replace them with yours To make the day brighter While thinking of being in your arms As I hold you tighter and tighter You and I can make things shine Our smiles, like a double rainbow in the sky As your words merge with mine We will rise above these dark days and fly Locked in a kiss of our own forever Looking down upon the water below We are everything we make of it In a timeless fashion, where rivers flow Heidi Sands 10/28/19

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Arturo Michael

Date: 10/30/2019 8:56:00 AM

Ah ah...You're "Poetry Dancing" ALIVE

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/30/2019 9:10:00 AM

Thank you so much Arturo. I appreciate your kindness, always. Have a nice day :)

Winged Warrior

Date: 10/30/2019 8:50:00 AM

You are a multi rainbow, my friend...spreading color and cheer...have a great day Heidi...lovely verse...^WW^ :o)

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/30/2019 9:10:00 AM

That is so nice of you to say WW. Thank you so much for brightening my day. ! :)

John Hamilton

Date: 10/29/2019 4:12:00 PM

Beautiful positive write Heidi, enjoyed so much, we can't change the weather but we can change our frame of mind...well said!

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/29/2019 7:10:00 PM

Thank you very much John. That's true and I appreciate you comment and feedback :)

Judy Ball

Date: 10/29/2019 5:44:00 AM

Lovely Heidi. You should give this to him on Valentines Day. He would love it. God Bless, JB

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/29/2019 10:28:00 AM

That is a sweet thought. Thank you very much Judy :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/29/2019 4:37:00 AM

- On Saturday I saw a double rainbow ... I'm sure it was yours :) - Lovely written, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/29/2019 10:28:00 AM

Oh Wow. That is great Anne-Lise. Thanks for your kind comment and sharing that :)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/29/2019 4:06:00 AM

This is a wonderful write, dear friend. I love it. God bless you, Gina

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/29/2019 10:28:00 AM

Thank you Gina. I hope you have a nice day :)

Hello There

Date: 10/28/2019 10:03:00 PM

This is a beautiful poem, Heidi. You can control where you let your thoughts drift, choosing to stay stuck in sour words and deeds or fly high in thoughts of something or someone that make you feel loved ~

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/29/2019 10:28:00 AM

Thank you very much HT. I appreciate your kind feedback :) Have a nice day!

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/28/2019 6:36:00 PM

sometimes regardless of how dreary the world, thoughts, hopes or dreams can make it a better day.... i l adore this one Heidi....beautiful :) hugs

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/28/2019 8:10:00 PM

Thank you very much Sandra. I am happy you like this one. Have a nice evening :)

Chris Green

Date: 10/28/2019 4:03:00 PM

Beautiful Heidi, especially this line, "Locked in a kiss of our own forever" Absolutely stunning

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/28/2019 4:11:00 PM

Thank you so much Chris. I appreciate your kind feedback and smile you brought me :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/28/2019 4:01:00 PM

Upbeat and happy..a dance under the rainbow..lovely write, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/28/2019 4:10:00 PM

Thank you very much Vijay! Have a nice evening :)