Double Love

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DOUBLE LOVE:

FROM MY ROOF GARDEN. PICTURE TAKEN BY ME. (c)

Your bitter words, sharp arrows, Were directed at my heart In two equal parts cut it Each loves you as much! (c) Demetrios Trifiatis 12 July 2016 7-7-7-5

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Alexis Y.

Date: 7/13/2016 8:07:00 AM

Hi Demetrios, It was a pleasure to read this well written piece. A huge seven:-) Alexis

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/13/2016 10:21:00 AM

Thank you my dearest, Alexis. Happy you liked it!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/12/2016 3:59:00 PM

awwhh, sweet as your floral display, demetrios.. huggs

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/13/2016 5:25:00 AM

You are sweet yourself dear, nette! Thank you so much for your lovely visit and appreciative comment!

Donna Jones

Date: 7/12/2016 3:48:00 PM

I really really love this

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/13/2016 5:28:00 AM

I really, really, thank you for your heartfelt comment dearest, Donna. Delighted to see you again!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/12/2016 2:40:00 PM

- So sad, a heart that split into two ....... is love strong, the hearts will grow together as one - (your unique beautiful flowers make a happy heart ) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/12/2016 3:21:00 PM

A heart that split in two and loves twice as much my dearest, Anne-Lise. Thank you so much for your wonderful comment and your appreciation of my flowers!

Probir Gupta

Date: 7/12/2016 5:29:00 AM

Towards almost an infinity with the very finite eyes ...

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/12/2016 5:50:00 AM

That is quite a compliment dear, Probir! Thank you for the visit! So kind of you!