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Double Decastich-Autumn Belle

Autumn Belle fell in a deep well, the animal rescue team came, but the well's cavity was too narrow... they waited until Tom brought a drill. And meow after meow she gradually became ill; and more famous than Hollywood stars she became, but could stardom have helped her fright, if she was hungry and trembling with fear? Yes, the chance of survival was slim for Autumn Belle! Autumn Belle, loved to play with Ginger and Bill, but they warned her of the danger by pointing their finger to the direction of the well, but as agile and smart as she was, she never understood what they meant... 'till tragedy stroke as her claws dug into the wet grass, peaking inside to satisfy her curiousity in a minute or less. No, death wasn't foreseen for Autumn Belle! Copyright 2010 by Andrew Crisci

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Date: 9/7/2010 4:24:00 AM
Congratulations Andrew on your win in Constance~A Rambling Poet's~ contest "Cat Poems~~". Love, Carol
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Date: 9/6/2010 4:31:00 PM
Andrew, Awww, so sad was this ending and I hope it wasn't true. When they say "Curiosity Killed the Cat" they have good reason for that well known saying. Congratulations on your win with this moving poem. Aloha, Connie
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Date: 9/3/2010 6:37:00 PM
Congratulations! Andrew a neat presentable way to put a story together in Verse. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/3/2010 5:40:00 PM
Congratulations on this win in Constance's contest, Andrew
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Date: 9/3/2010 10:06:00 AM
AHHH, pooor Autumn Bell. WAs this a true story? Congrats on your win, Andrew. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 9/2/2010 7:03:00 PM
I remember a story from when I was young of a little girl who fell in the well and was actually rescued but it took a long agonizing time. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/2/2010 6:45:00 PM
congrats on your win in the contest, well done
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Date: 9/2/2010 6:16:00 PM
Congrats Andrew on your purr fect win in the CAT contest... a great write.. enjoyed .. and u enjoy your safe and happy holiday weekend with luv... have u viewed my wedding photos on my blog yet???
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Date: 9/2/2010 5:42:00 PM
Sweet Andrew, Congratulations on your win in Constance's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/28/2010 7:17:00 PM
Very creative and well worded write on autumn, Good luck, Andrew
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Date: 8/28/2010 2:24:00 PM
Andrew, a touching poem, and good luck in the contest,..LeeAnn
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Date: 8/28/2010 9:53:00 AM
What a story of poor Autumn Belle falling into the well and the struggles of people trying to save her making her renowned. Very nicely written, Andrew. Love and blessings, Carolyn
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