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Doors On Fire

Being a recluse, I have lost track of sun’s hues and the flavor of meadows in snow. Bronze doorknobs are cold, frozen like my rusty, numb thoughts. Must I remember how they were slain? The wails come to haunt those bleeding midnights, when tears flooded a room opening doors with shots of fire. From Amelie Mara Door To A Wayra Contest Jul 18, 2014

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Date: 7/29/2014 12:44:00 PM
Amelie, Congratulations, on making Nette's winning list. She's a tough judge. Take Care, LINDA :)
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Date: 7/25/2014 7:38:00 PM
Amelie, creative winner that I really enjoyed reading!
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Date: 7/25/2014 2:27:00 PM
how you ended this was truly a surprise.. truly creative and thought-provoking, amelie...please write some more!.. your glory win in my contest gladdens me.. congrats and huggs
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Date: 7/25/2014 5:53:00 AM
Wonderful unique write Amelie,, loved the most,, congrats on huge win!
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Date: 7/24/2014 7:20:00 PM
OMG. This is a WOW poem. So intense. So well crafted. BIG congrats to you. and A fave on this one!!!
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Date: 7/24/2014 2:02:00 PM
Awesome, I have not read your work before I will go try MORE! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 7/24/2014 12:48:00 PM
grats on your win Amelie, good to see you on the winners list:)
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Date: 7/24/2014 11:14:00 AM
Very unique and Im glad it got a good placement,,Congrats. BG
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Date: 7/24/2014 9:28:00 AM
Big congrats on this fine win. Your poem is truly beautiful! BBBBravooooooooo!!!
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Date: 7/24/2014 7:06:00 AM
I may copy and paste congrats but I have read your work and find its quality very good..Sara
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Date: 7/24/2014 6:33:00 AM
Love the take on the theme - so different to others I have read - a worthy winner. Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/24/2014 6:09:00 AM
Perfect wayra with a nice Approach to the theme, congrats
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Date: 7/19/2014 10:39:00 AM
I like this too! It's hauntingly raw beauty, and dark emotion. Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 7/19/2014 9:17:00 AM
This is wonderful Amelie...I'm sure it will do well...hugs Tim
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