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Doors Into Doors

Her lips pattering Forming his name on her tongue She sent him word she loved him Death, work, art, home nothing Her love for him was above all. And he knew quite well That doors opened into doors And more doors, no end of doors Some jumping at a touch Knobs or no knobs, slow or heavy. +++++++ July 19, 2014 Form: Wayra (5,7,7,6,8,) Syllables 33+33=66 Dr. Ram Mehta Seventh Place win Contest: Doors to A Wayra by nette onclaud

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/29/2014 12:45:00 PM

Dr Ram,, Congratulations, on making Nette's winning list. She's a tough judge. Take Care, LINDA :)

Robin Davis

Date: 7/29/2014 7:25:00 AM

Dr Ram A very unique, interesting, moving, deep and powerful write, with a thought provoking hidden message. Thank you for the nice comment on my Back On Track poem

Paul Callus

Date: 7/25/2014 3:43:00 PM

Very interesting write Dr. To me it reads as if nothing is impossible in life, whether it is easy or hard to achieve. Congrats on your win. // paul

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/25/2014 2:53:00 PM

semi-abstract that leaves a touch of mystery to this piece, dr.ram.. your splendid win in my contest gladdens me.. congrats and huggs

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/25/2014 6:08:00 AM

And back again wid huge congrats Dr Ram for this winning fabulous write!

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 7/24/2014 11:30:00 PM

Lovely and wonderful entry,Dr.Ram....Congrats on your win...

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/24/2014 9:39:00 PM

What a deep and thoughtful entry, Well done win Dr. Ram :) Always enjoy your thoughts :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/24/2014 7:37:00 PM

A very interesting one, and deep. Congrats for your win.

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 7/24/2014 11:42:00 AM

Knowing, reckoning ahead of time makes the passage through those many doors so much easier. 66 syllables, well-written. I enjoyed it, Dr. Ram. Congratulations! PS thanks for the comment on my own entry and many others.

Robert Lindley

Date: 7/24/2014 10:07:00 AM

Great poem my friend. Wisdom contained in it's message is great! The following stanza blew me away in it's deep message, that of ever present hope. "And he knew quite well That doors opened into doors And more doors, no end of doors Some jumping at a touch Knobs or no knobs, slow or heavy."