Dr.Ram Mehta Poet Verse

Doors Into Doors

Her lips pattering
Forming his name on her tongue
She sent him word she loved him
Death, work, art, home nothing
Her love for him was above all.

And he knew quite well
That doors opened into doors
And more doors, no end of doors
Some jumping at a touch
Knobs or no knobs, slow or heavy.

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July 19, 2014
Form: Wayra (5,7,7,6,8,) Syllables 33+33=66
Dr. Ram Mehta
Seventh Place win
Contest: Doors to A Wayra by nette onclaud

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Poet Destroyer A July 29, 2014 at 12:45 PM Dr Ram,, Congratulations, on making Nette's winning list. She's a tough judge. Take Care, LINDA :)

Robin Davis July 29, 2014 at 7:25 AM Dr Ram A very unique, interesting, moving, deep and powerful write, with a thought provoking hidden message. Thank you for the nice comment on my Back On Track poem

Paul Callus July 25, 2014 at 3:43 PM Very interesting write Dr. To me it reads as if nothing is impossible in life, whether it is easy or hard to achieve. Congrats on your win. // paul

Nette Onclaud July 25, 2014 at 2:53 PM semi-abstract that leaves a touch of mystery to this piece, dr.ram.. your splendid win in my contest gladdens me.. congrats and huggs

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 25, 2014 at 6:08 AM And back again wid huge congrats Dr Ram for this winning fabulous write!

Olusegun Arowolo July 24, 2014 at 11:30 PM Lovely and wonderful entry,Dr.Ram....Congrats on your win...

Casarah Nance July 24, 2014 at 9:39 PM What a deep and thoughtful entry, Well done win Dr. Ram :) Always enjoy your thoughts :)

Andrea Dietrich July 24, 2014 at 7:37 PM A very interesting one, and deep. Congrats for your win.

Reason A. Poteet July 24, 2014 at 11:42 AM Knowing, reckoning ahead of time makes the passage through those many doors so much easier. 66 syllables, well-written. I enjoyed it, Dr. Ram. Congratulations! PS thanks for the comment on my own entry and many others.

Robert Lindley July 24, 2014 at 10:07 AM Great poem my friend. Wisdom contained in it's message is great! The following stanza blew me away in it's deep message, that of ever present hope. "And he knew quite well That doors opened into doors And more doors, no end of doors Some jumping at a touch Knobs or no knobs, slow or heavy."

Sara Kendrick July 24, 2014 at 6:56 AM Interesting way to go to the Wayra..Congrats..Sara

Jan Allison July 24, 2014 at 6:39 AM dropping back with my congratulations. Hugs Jan xx

Keith Robson July 20, 2014 at 9:28 AM Beautifully put Ram, your wording is lovely...Keith.

Jan Allison July 20, 2014 at 5:29 AM wonderful write Dr Mehta Good luck in the contest. Hugs jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 19, 2014 at 3:16 AM Well penned Dr Ram ! gl in contest!