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And in my dream I walk corridors with old creaking floors, deep in the sanctum of my soul voices stir calling me to come; and soon, I enter a hall of doors, doors and doors . . . red doors painted bright, green doors with polished knobs. Blue, deep and dark lovely blue, and varnished doors, a heavy ornate church door, is ajar with beckoning hymns drifting; one hundred year old doors with brass chimes- portals to long ago, wide barn doors in antique grey, with open wide thresholds. Doors with chipped white paint- oh my beating heart, rounded doors, broken doors, some to push, some to pull; through a long forgotten door- the wreckage of my life . . . A door opens, new and polished- the entrance to where? Closed doors, swinging doors, locked doors with a sign Do Not Open, doors with steps, doors with brass keys dangling; and doors with chimes, press here for access, my dear, then, I see two doors side by side, a simple cedar door- a golden door. Oh, I stand unsure, which door? I hesitate and then, I put my hand on the knob of the golden door- Nirvana is beyond; then, I open the simple cedar door, which takes me to the here and now, and I breathe a sigh of relief, yes, this is exactly where I need to be. ______________________ March 24, 2017 Poetry/Prose Poetry/Doors Copyright Protected, ID 17-9602-78-0 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym.

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Date: 11/27/2017 2:53:00 AM
Loved this one BW, this is a great write, well thought out and beautifully written with a wonderfully expressive flow leading the reader to await what comes next.
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Date: 11/12/2017 6:22:00 AM
Excellent. Beautifully said. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 11/11/2017 2:38:00 PM
just beautiful, my friend
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Date: 11/11/2017 12:55:00 PM
What a grouping of doors you have written about, so many and each so very beautiful in their own way! You have enlightened me by the splendor of this incredible poem here my friend! What a grandiose piece, I love that you chose the door to here and now! Great Work!!
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Date: 11/11/2017 11:53:00 AM
Your poetry is very beautiful; I wish I could write half as well in prose :All the best in the contest! :)
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Constance La France
Date: 11/11/2017 12:06:00 PM
Thank you for the compliment and visit

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