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When all the doors are closed, and you’re behind Thick walls that seem to offer no escape You thrash around, lament the cruel fate, Beat unresponsive stone with bloody hands. When all the doors are closed, and you regret The path not taken, weep about the choice You did not make, feel that it is too late, And, in despair, think this is where it ends – Be still! The prison silence forces you To listen to the quiet inner voice, And you’ll find clarity, and see the gate Through which you can emerge in new green lands. 3/28/2017 For contest Doors Sponsored by Richard Lamoureux

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Date: 7/24/2018 10:50:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Agnes. What a smooth read.
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Date: 4/16/2017 12:57:00 AM
I like the feel of this positive write Agnes, congrats on a fine win.
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 4/16/2017 11:11:00 AM
Thank you very much, Richard. I am so glad you liked my poem.
Date: 4/8/2017 1:22:00 PM
Hello Agness. Good Afternoon. Your entry speaks. You wrote of life with grace and with elegance not to mention truth. Your words provide inspiration for those who may be lost for a moment. Well done entirely.
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 4/16/2017 11:12:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words, Lisa.
Date: 3/28/2017 11:22:00 AM
This was wonderful Agnes and it is nice to see you posting again. I have missed your poetry. Good luck in the contest, this one should do well.
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 3/28/2017 2:07:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words, Chris. I feel touched to have been missed. I had a crazy overwhelming week at work and have missed being here, too.
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 3/28/2017 11:23:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words, Chris. I feel touched to have been missed. I had a crazy overwhelming week at work and have missed being here, too.

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