Get Your Premium Membership

Door Mates

Door Mates He sits there alone feeding the pigeons worn out from banging on doors forever closed to him. She cleans someone elses home. It is the only house she has ever had a key to. They meet every evening satisfied that their persistence opened doors for their children. They were the backbone of a resistance the heart of a revolution now overlooked by those setting fire to the doors believing they have been opened. He opens the door she smiles their small apartment a place of peace. ©7/23/2021 DOORS Poetry Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 8/1/2021 10:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. "Door Mates" is a creative story/write. If "Door Mates" could speak, what would they say??? Have a blessed day with your win...............
Login to Reply
Date: 7/30/2021 7:01:00 AM
such a touching piece, no wonder it placed so well in the contest, Many congrats John:-) hugs Jan xx
Login to Reply
Date: 7/29/2021 10:50:00 PM
So lovely.....this door talks volumes....Congrats on your top win John :)
Login to Reply
Date: 7/29/2021 8:32:00 PM
This talks volume. Doors of one's closeness and aloofness. Under the same roof yet each in their world. Congratulations 0n your win!
Login to Reply
Date: 7/26/2021 8:30:00 PM
Stirs many long-ago memories, John. Poignant piece, tenderly treated. Superb! ~ Gershon
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things