Don'T You Know

Don’t you know?

Your heart is a stirring wandering minstrel
that plays softly soulful at my window 
it is the weeping voice of the cello
that begs his companion the moon to dwell

in sleepy stillness, embracing the night
yet a little bit longer with its glow,
while already dawn’s envious rays show
their eager smiles; and even this quiet

tireless old traveler that knows no grief,
Death, did suspend his course, and in delight
listened on the waves of silence, a brief

moment in time sparing us. Don’t you know
that the sweet sound of your gentle footsteps        
has etched its way into my heart and grows?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 4/5/2017 9:00:00 AM
Just pure magic dear, Anne-Marie! C'est magique mon amie! A 7!
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Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 4/5/2017 7:25:00 PM
Merci mille fois d'avoir lu et appécié Demetrios. Je suis ravie d'avoir pu apporter un peu de magie dans ta journée. Glad it brought a little bit of magic in your day. Thanks a million :)
Date: 4/5/2017 5:42:00 AM
So beautifully written... A lovely sonnet indeed... Thanks for sharing... I enjoyed it... A big 7...
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Date: 4/5/2017 7:23:00 PM
It was a fun write. I am glad you enjoyed it Supraja. Thank you for your comment and your generous rating :)
Date: 4/4/2017 9:04:00 AM
Loved this sonnet, and particularly impressive imagery used, a7 for this piece of art.
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Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 4/4/2017 9:02:00 PM
Thank you for your kindhearted comments John and the generous rating. :)
Date: 4/4/2017 6:02:00 AM
Good Morning Anne-Marie. This entry is poetically beautiful. I so enjoyed it tenderness and gentle thoughts. What a wonderful way to start the morning. The entry and you deserve more than a 7. Honestly. Well done entirely. Have a great morning and day.
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Date: 4/4/2017 7:12:00 AM
Indeed, your day seems to start early Lisa, and it was a pleasure for me to start this day with your thoughtful and kindhearted review. I was thinking about all the people that touch my heart and bring light into my life when I wrote this piece. By the way, thank you so much for the generous rating. Have a wonderful day :)
Date: 4/4/2017 3:59:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned . Thanks for sharing it.
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Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 4/4/2017 7:03:00 AM
I am glad you liked it Ravi. Thank you for your kind review :)
Date: 4/3/2017 12:16:00 PM
Gorgeous write Anne-Marie :) xomo!
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Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 4/3/2017 11:05:00 PM
Thank you so much Maureen for your review :)
Date: 4/3/2017 9:49:00 AM
Oh, the images and sound you paint for me here in words, beautiful!
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Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 4/3/2017 11:04:00 PM
I am glad you liked the images Darren. I was afraid it was perhaps a bit too much, but I have a hard time stopping the flow when they come my way.
Date: 4/3/2017 8:34:00 AM
This is absolutely beautiful Anne-Marie. I bit haunting and a lot enchanting. This reads like a whisper on a soft evening breeze.
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Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 4/3/2017 11:03:00 PM
Thank you so much for your thoughtful and generous comments Chris. I'm glad you liked it.
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