Don'T Quit Your Dream- POTD

Night stirred memories, once forgotten of the days 
I burnt in love when you consumed my days,
and I carried you like a queen in the palanquin of my thoughts!

without forethought, to elbow out the marauding of memories,
I set out, travelling miles, my heart throbbing in my chest
my legs shaking and trembling, finally reaching your hermitage

casting away my stilted pride, expectant and anxious,
I waited at your doorstep to seize the moment
to renew a commitment and knocked hopefully at your door.

while listening intent for the approaching footsteps
and the sound of the key turning on the latch
did I see a face peering through the window, and quickly withdraw?
was it the face I longed to see?

time skipped quickly by, hours flitted 
between limping dawns and staggering nights

how long had I waited there? Was it weeks, months, or years?

I knew roots had grown under my feet
and my body had vegetated into a tree

in Time’s eternal motion, the tree will remain there
as a trunk of fossilized dream till your love charges life into it!

Nov.24. 2022

~ Placed Second~

POEM OF THE DAY

Don’t Quit Your Daydream Poetry Contest
Sponsor -craig cornish

Dec.8.2022

2022, Marathon Mile.22. Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Mark Toney
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Lawless Avatar
December 11, 2022 at 4:59 AM
forever rooted in the dream.....Beautifully done Valsa.
George Avatar
December 12, 2022 at 4:05 AM
Yes, forever rooted ! Thanks a lot John
Gasun Avatar
December 11, 2022 at 12:38 AM
This is incredibly lovely my dear friend Valsa! I'm totally blown away while reading your magical dream. Congratulations on your well-deserved shining win and POTD! Thank you so much for sharing. Blessings to you always and your writings. Hugs
George Avatar
December 12, 2022 at 4:04 AM
I feel so delighted by your uplifting comment, dear Len ! Thanks a lot and blessings!
Brul Avatar
December 10, 2022 at 7:40 PM
I missed the POTD of this gem. Belated congratulations and another on your fabulous win in Mark Toney's contest.
George Avatar
December 12, 2022 at 4:03 AM
The result of Mark Toney's contest is not out. Got a second place in Craig's contest. Jez, may your words become prophetic :) Thanks a lot dear friend.
Peck Avatar
December 10, 2022 at 8:53 AM
Beautiful, magical dream, dear Valsa. Congratulations on your win!
George Avatar
December 12, 2022 at 4:00 AM
Thank you very much dear Ann
Sinha-Roy Avatar
December 10, 2022 at 12:48 AM
Congratulations.
George Avatar
December 12, 2022 at 3:59 AM
Thank you poet friend !
Adhikary Avatar
December 9, 2022 at 7:20 PM
Incredible imagery and imagination. Dreams of love don't remain dormant for long...... Congratulations on your second place win
George Avatar
December 12, 2022 at 3:59 AM
Thank you so much Ranaditya for your kind visit to my page and lovely comment
Poet Avatar
December 9, 2022 at 2:14 PM
Back for the 3rd time, dear Valsa, with heartfelt Congratulations on your contest win with this wonderful poem.
George Avatar
December 12, 2022 at 3:57 AM
Thanks a lot Lasaad for your second visit with congratulations
Lawrence Avatar
December 1, 2022 at 12:14 PM
I am late in reading this magical gem of yours dear Valsa ! Congratulations on POTD. Your mind and heart are rich and your soul beautifully deep . Blessings to you , Susan :)
George Avatar
December 12, 2022 at 3:56 AM
This comment from you is much valued and appreciated dear Susan. Thanks a lot
Dietrich Avatar
November 27, 2022 at 10:04 AM
oh, and big congrats on POTD
George Avatar
December 12, 2022 at 3:48 AM
Thank you so much Andrea !
Dietrich Avatar
November 27, 2022 at 10:04 AM
WOW, now this would garner a top spot if I were judging. I Love this.
George Avatar
December 12, 2022 at 3:50 AM
I am so happy if you think so. Thanks a lot great poetess.
Messina Avatar
November 27, 2022 at 3:34 AM
A delightful and uplifting poem, Valsa. Beautifully written my dear friend. Belated Congrats on POTD...Charlie
George Avatar
December 12, 2022 at 3:48 AM
Thanks a lot dear Charles ....
Nicole Avatar
November 25, 2022 at 6:29 PM
"I knew roots had grown under my feet and my body had vegetated into a tree." I love everything about this thought, because that's true dedication. Anything is possible in a dream, so continue reach for the stars. Congratulations Valsa, on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. Hugs, Brandy
George Avatar
December 12, 2022 at 3:46 AM
Brandy, your analytical comment has delighted me so much. Thank you from the bottom of my heart. Love and blessings sweet friend....
Gorelick Avatar
November 25, 2022 at 6:10 PM
Congratulations on your POTD Valsa! An exclusive excursion into the depts of love and loss and vulnerability. Robert
George Avatar
December 12, 2022 at 3:44 AM
Well said. Yes, an excursion into the depths of love. Thanks a lot dear Robert !
Ray Choudhury Avatar
November 25, 2022 at 3:39 PM
Huge Congratulations on your POTD, Dear Valsa. Wow, you have created a mesmerizing poem - the last two stanzas are outstanding in their depth of meaning. Wonderful creation! Love and best wishes ~ Mala
George Avatar
November 28, 2022 at 5:59 AM
You are always very generous in your comments. For the very reason, it is a pleasure reading your feedback. Thanks a lot dear friend Mala.
Mccann Avatar
November 25, 2022 at 3:08 PM
I can only add to the applause, Valsa! Such skill to write exceedingly clever phrases, e.g. "stilted pride, just for starts, without detracting one bit from the sadness, the long waiting. Elizabeth
George Avatar
November 28, 2022 at 5:57 AM
So delighted by your analytical comment ! Thanks a lot dear poet friend
Hankins Avatar
November 25, 2022 at 11:20 AM
Congratulations on your P.O.T.D., Valsa.
George Avatar
November 28, 2022 at 5:55 AM
Thanks a lot Milton !
Slaughter Avatar
November 25, 2022 at 10:25 AM
And don't quit yours, Valsa. I love the many, many wonderful expressions in this piece, i.e. "the marauding of memories"; "the palanquin of my thoughts"; "limping dawns and staggering nights". Congrats on POTD and BOL in the contest.
George Avatar
November 28, 2022 at 5:55 AM
Thank you dear Jim for your analytical comment and great appreciation
Poet Avatar
November 25, 2022 at 10:09 AM
Back with heartfelt congratulations on your amply deserved POTD, Dear Valsa, enjoy your honor
George Avatar
November 28, 2022 at 5:54 AM
You are always a supporter to me. I feast on your constant encouragement. I have no words to thank you
Anaya Avatar
November 25, 2022 at 8:50 AM
Congratulations on your POTD Valsa!!! A soulful discussion, you can create anything with imagination and love, you created beautiful moments from an imaginary world. Easy to follow you on your journey of discoveries through time.
George Avatar
November 28, 2022 at 5:52 AM
Thanks a lot Anaya. Glad you could follow me in my journey !
Trifiatis Avatar
November 25, 2022 at 7:00 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved honor for this marvelous poem, dearest Valsa. Be blessed!
George Avatar
November 25, 2022 at 8:03 AM
If you think my poem is marvelous , I feel so delighted . Thank you so much dear friend.
Alex Avatar
November 25, 2022 at 6:25 AM
Your uniqueness is very beautifully expressed in this poem. My hearty congratulations!
George Avatar
November 25, 2022 at 8:01 AM
I feel you all write better than me. Never expected this much of recognition. Thanks a lot Chris . I will be able to comment on your poems only later as I have a function to attend and will be free only by Sunday afternoon
Lawless Avatar
November 25, 2022 at 6:22 AM
a dream rooted in a dream...beautiful metaphor of the tree in this dream. Well done and congrats on POTD
George Avatar
November 25, 2022 at 7:56 AM
Thanks John for your insightful comment. Feel quite delighted !
Wolf Avatar
November 25, 2022 at 5:53 AM
Congrats on POTD, Valsa. Now I've got to get back to my current daydream, before anyone can accuse me of quitting it! ~ Live the Dream, gw
George Avatar
November 25, 2022 at 7:55 AM
Keep dreaming dear Gershon ! Never quit it ! Thanks a lot for your light hearted comment.
Buhagiar Avatar
November 25, 2022 at 5:48 AM
Well done on your POTD.
George Avatar
November 25, 2022 at 7:52 AM
Thanks a lot Victor !
Sands Avatar
November 25, 2022 at 5:48 AM
Congratulations for this great poem of the day. Excellent :)
George Avatar
November 25, 2022 at 7:53 AM
Thanks for your excellent grading, dear Heidi
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