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Don'T Leave Me Behind

Remote whispers echo in the night; aspiring for company. Dawn emerges silently thru a tear in my shade. The abating sunrise beckons my breath and eases my soul; but the ache in my heart lingers still. Alone I sit, ignoring daylight; hiding in my shadow. Disregarding what to be true and holding on to complete emptiness. Tomorrow is no surprise it starts all over again without concession; yet today I leave a part of me, unwillingly. Struggling to secure patience eludes me. My mind flits occasionally, determined to evade. Like tumbling stones, I climb to the peek and fall to depths out of control. Loneliness is the word I speak facing days to fulfillment. Promises last forever in eternal space. Captured by emotions your stunning grace. Visions of your smile your tender embrace last only awhile. Don’t leave me behind find me a place. Copyright © 2005 By Caryl S. Muzzey Second Place Winner ~ The Uread Poems Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Yasmin Khan July 22, 2012

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Date: 7/26/2012 9:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Yasmin's "The Unread Poems"contest Caryl. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/25/2012 3:21:00 AM
Caryl super congrats on your win, excellent write...David
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Date: 7/23/2012 5:04:00 PM
very sweet....made me feel like I was there in the poem... such a lovely flow to it.. Congrates on your win! Jane XoXo
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Date: 7/23/2012 12:48:00 PM
The melancholia drifts through my mind in every line.......beautifully written!
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Date: 7/23/2012 6:40:00 AM
congrats Caryl on a marvelous write and win for this excellent entry .. awesome words ..
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