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Don'T Leave Me

"Leave me in the night but please don't leave me in the dark" - Tom Robbins
In the dark night if I lose the light on pathway for me a candle you will kindle I surely know. The edge of wan tapestry of my life may fray, if the dust of dreams the storm of strife blows, hold my hands, don’t leave me, I would say.
August 26, 2019 Contest : Writing Challenge 3, August 2019 - Five Lines Sponsor : Dear Heart - Wiishkobi Ode

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Date: 8/31/2019 10:17:00 PM
Subimal, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful rhyming poem ~
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Date: 8/29/2019 12:51:00 PM
GREAT. CONGRATS
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/30/2019 12:13:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 8/29/2019 4:00:00 AM
- Congratulations on your great win, Subimal :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/30/2019 12:13:00 AM
Many thanks, Anne-Lise for your visit.
Date: 8/29/2019 2:00:00 AM
Thank you, Darlene for your visit.
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Date: 8/28/2019 11:51:00 AM
Hello Subimal Shinha-Roy, I sense that you are very close to this person. That is what i get from your poem. Have a nice day my friend.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/30/2019 12:12:00 AM
Thank you, Darlene for your visit.

Book: Shattered Sighs