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Dont Have One Yet

Drowning sorrows lume bettween the walls, weaving through like a knot in a rope Turn after turn, Deeper and deeper. Knowing that the end is near, All sorrows drift in to the abyss. A moment of pure ecstasy before that dark good night.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 2/9/2024 7:42:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/23/2016 10:09:00 PM

Josh, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 6/22/2016 6:44:00 AM

Josh John, how interesting. Glad to see a new one from you. Enjoyed yourself and take advantage of the best poetry site ever. ;) skat