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Don't Give Up

I recognize those dark cynical thoughts
the ones that spin viciously in your headspace

incessant the whirlwind of nightmares
I can feel their every spasm and tremor

we’re two of a kind you and I in the hollow
lightning bolts in the storms of the night

distraught echoes of screams amid the tornado
lost while frustration’s cast madly in every direction

I sense the strained fury of anxiety’s trauma
deep shadows of despair where your anger’s built up

a labyrinth so convoluted electrical currents run amok
the fog haunts a blurred mind that’s muddled and garbled

surprisingly all is not as hopeless as it may appear
if you dare hold on… don’t give up… take my hand



Read on air by invitation  ~  May 14, 2021  'LATE NIGHT POETS'

AP: 2nd place 2022, Honorable Mention 2021

Submitted on May 12, 2021 for contest ALL YOURS (MAY 14) sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 1ST
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De Beaulieu Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 12:04 PM
Hello Lin, Good advice. Hugs Darlene
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 14, 2021 at 11:02 AM
Hello I will. You have an enjoyable day to. Hugs.
Gauthier Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 12:38 PM
Thanks, Darlene. Have a lovely day ~
Mcintosh Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 4:40 AM
Wonderful words, whimsical and warm... love it. God bless you always. Love, Gina
Gauthier Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 8:50 AM
Thanks, Gina ~
Turner Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 8:30 PM
Only someone who has dealt with depression could write a poem like this. I wrote one a few years back entitled my depression. Crazy good writing, Line. A subject most avoid.
Turner Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 6:49 AM
not the first time I was wrong:)
Gauthier Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 10:38 PM
Thanks, Daniel. Actually it's about a friend and hearing what she went through ~ thank you
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