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          Dorothy by Forunth in DevianArt

Don't Follow the Road to Oz

I asked the wee Munchkins, "Which way do I go?"
Figured since they lived here, they would be in the know.
But they looked at me uncertainly, scared of the witch.
Then realizing she was dead; they did a double take
and said, "Follow the yellow brick road without a hassle,
through the blooming poppy field but stay awake,
then on past the shire you will find an emerald castle."

After a drugged nap among the poppies with new friends,
I'd found along the way; I skipped on the yellow bricks
that came to an abrupt end without paying dividends.
I was definitely lost; not in paradise that was for sure,
but in a place, I soon feared would not take me home.
This was a strange land I'd rather not have to endure.

I'd heard about the wizard, the greatest mind in Oz
but one who never showed his face, for goodness sake!
Toto exposed the rake when he opened the curtain wide,
and there was the Mighty Wizard, where he chose to hide.
Anger raged in my heart, and I chided him for his sham.
Admittedly, he confessed although I knew he was a flake.
Said he wanted to feel important, and his name was Sam.

Now, how was I supposed to get home back to Aunty Em?
My friends found what they needed; I was glad for them.
At least the Scarecrow got a brain. No fear he'd be burned.
The Tin Man had a heart and Lion had courage he'd earned.
I'm thankful for the wicked witch's shiny red ruby slippers
that good witch, Glenda told me I should keep on my feet,
for by clicking their heels would I wake from this nightmare.
I'm in Kansas, but should've wished for Paris, or anywhere!!
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Kitchin Avatar
March 17, 2024 at 5:13 AM
Lin, fun and creative, congratulations on POTW!
Lane Avatar
March 17, 2024 at 3:40 PM
Just another glitch on the site. No problem. Thanks, Tania.
Kitchin Avatar
March 17, 2024 at 2:46 PM
Lin, I just saw that your poem was remove for POTW. Gremlins in the soup. I enjoyed your poem, it is fun and entertaining.
Lane Avatar
March 17, 2024 at 5:48 AM
I was wondering why email notification was sent several times on a poem written days ago. Thanks a bunch, Tania.
Kavanagh  Avatar
March 17, 2024 at 4:22 AM
Love your irreverent take on the wizard of Oz Lin, yeah I too could think of many exciting places I’d probably wish for rather than Kansas, but home is home even when not in Rome, congratulations on yet another well deserved POTW, cheers David
Lane Avatar
March 17, 2024 at 5:47 AM
If he deserved reverence he'd get it. Ha and thank you David. Deserved or not, two weeks in a row must be another PS glitch, but que sera sera.
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March 17, 2024 at 4:07 AM
A brilliant read Lin, you write incredible tales. Congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the week… Beryl
Lane Avatar
March 17, 2024 at 5:46 AM
Hi Beryl, (you'll always be Belle to me) I appreciate another visit from you.
M  Avatar
March 17, 2024 at 3:41 AM
Whooo two weeks in a row…..you are on fire my lovely Lin! Well done you…..how very deserving and special!! Yay! Congratulations on POTW again!! Debx
Lane Avatar
March 17, 2024 at 5:45 AM
That's strange, but whatever... Thank you. Deb... again.
Willason Avatar
March 14, 2024 at 2:23 AM
You have a rare skill Lin in recasting the old into the new....takes imagination and stamina...just a pleasure to read. You keep the mind entertained with the lively language and flow.
Lane Avatar
March 17, 2024 at 5:41 AM
~ and you, my poetic friend, Paul, have a great skill at penning wonderful comments. Thank you very much.
Alhemaidy Avatar
March 13, 2024 at 5:05 PM
Very interesting read!
Lane Avatar
March 13, 2024 at 6:07 PM
It was a bit out of the box, wasn't it? Thanks, ~AA.
Nicholsen Avatar
March 13, 2024 at 4:19 PM
Awesome write enjoyed reading your short story.
Lane Avatar
March 13, 2024 at 6:05 PM
Hello, Yolanda and thank you for reading and leaving me such a kind comment.
Baker Avatar
March 13, 2024 at 3:24 PM
Clever take on the ending for Dorothy, Lin. I enjoyed the tale in poetic form. Thanks for sharing your creativity with us through your fine poetry, my dear friend. Hugs, Bill p.s. This goes on my FAV list :-)!
Lane Avatar
March 13, 2024 at 6:04 PM
I'm not sure where or why this one came to be, Bill. That movie is a treasure trove of impetus for writing poetry. Thanks a lot for liking it well enough to comment and fav.
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