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Don'T Ask--Don'T Tell

A spiral curl upon her brow, She can't recall how it all began She can't recall how it came to this No names are shared, he doesn't care He doesn't ask...........she doesn't tell She doesn't tell.........he doesn't ask She promises herself, this will be the last A small tattoo, a trailing rose It wanders down, beneath her clothes She dims the light One look, he falls into the spell, she has composed She knows the score....from those before Beneath the trellis of a smile Cold fingers grope, to touch the thorns and there is born, a heart of stone Without a word, her taste runs cold His lust is hot......her time is bought Her lot in life, tomorrow's scorn Her honey, wild, once laced with gold Until the taste was tainted cold In lonely rooms, pink roses slept Where bedside shadows paid the rent The tears she wept so long ago Now shuttered tight, where secrets hide Against the dark, against the tide All shame has learned to shut an eye A child, a lily in the bud Has never known the trace of love All fear is gone, but not forgot Redemption, now, it matters not Where ecstasy, is never sought A tear upon the lash won’t fall The garland once upon her dress Is now tattooed upon her breast His urgent thrust, to her is death He pants one breath, then takes a rest She doesn't speak.......he falls asleep He didn't ask..............she didn't tell She promises, he'll be the last No questions asked ______________________________________________ For Charlotte's Contest, Erotic Scorchers: 11/27/13

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Date: 12/20/2013 6:32:00 AM
Wow what a poem congratulations on the win with this great writing. Your soup friend Michael
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Date: 12/11/2013 9:55:00 AM
wow... Carrie, enjoyed your winning poem... Congratulations in "'Charlotte's Scorchers: Erotic/Sensual Poetry''...have a nice one... LUV LINDA
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Date: 12/10/2013 4:15:00 PM
Fantastic poem Carrie, well done ...Seren
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Date: 12/8/2013 4:13:00 PM
hey hey, big number one!!!! and big congrats to you, Carrie.
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Date: 12/8/2013 2:34:00 PM
Carrie....this is so deep and meaningful....You are soooooo talented. Congrats, my dear....hugs
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Date: 12/8/2013 11:07:00 AM
Extraordinary! A sad yet beautiful piece, and a much-deserved win... Jack
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Date: 12/8/2013 7:15:00 AM
love it Carrie a worthy win indeed xx
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Date: 12/8/2013 7:13:00 AM
My biggest hearty congratulations on your super shining win my dear friend, Carrie! Cheers and big hugs! Thanks for sharing this amazing poem of yours. love lots, Leonora
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Date: 12/7/2013 7:17:00 PM
congrats Carrie a fine poem Shadow x smile hug
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Date: 12/7/2013 7:10:00 PM
I knew it was great.the first time I enjoyed reading it .congratulations
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Date: 12/7/2013 5:55:00 PM
splendid....congrats on your win
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Date: 12/7/2013 5:35:00 PM
wowser Carrie a great verse on many levels, and done with your usual grace. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 12/7/2013 4:38:00 PM
carrie, this is an exceptional piece, and the 1st place reflects that - it resonates personally with me, and doesn't exactly conjure feelings of eroticism and sensuality, but rather feelings of darkness and sadness...I note you've changed a couple of lines, and possibly I preferred the original "in lonely rooms, pink roses slept/where bedside shadows have paid the rent", but that's just me splitting hairs :) an outstanding poem, it was never going to be anything other than a 1st - congrats!
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Date: 12/3/2013 5:33:00 PM
wow, Carrie, a very unique entry to the contest. Don't ask, don't tell. A lot of people adopt this attitude rather than face truth. I enjoyed this one.
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Date: 12/3/2013 2:45:00 PM
Mercy! That's fine writing. It took me right in....
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Date: 12/2/2013 2:56:00 PM
Whew, so much emotion. No pleasure is this kind of love, just, it seems, a feeling of emptiness and regret. Perhaps the right questions would have revealed what was already known. Allan
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Date: 12/1/2013 8:46:00 PM
You amazing you..I am very busy too be online lately but it feels so good this early morn to make time and read your verse dear.
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Date: 11/28/2013 6:04:00 PM
Carrie tremendous....writing.....wonderful....
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Date: 11/28/2013 1:46:00 PM
wow this is a powerful write Carrie...I could see her, I could feel her pain, I have known of one like her, though this one still lives, her body is her support for her drugs ...excellent piece!
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Date: 11/27/2013 9:23:00 PM
Wow, the words you have written ring out strongly into the air my friend, and I have heard them loud and clear...such a tearjerker it is! This poem is so very powerful, it made me very aware of her situation within your piece and the utter sadness within her life! This is a tremendous write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this impressive poem this evening! What a sad piece, but told expertly, Great work!!
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Date: 11/27/2013 9:12:00 PM
Actions speak more than words, Carrie
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