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Dones

Late fall, trees half dressed sway over glittering cast offs The reach for charcoal and white waiting canvas Pauses in now familiar hesitation The moment shimmers alive To dissipate in pink contrails Of yet another unfulfilled sunset Another thought train clatters into distance Whence came this single tear To well in unseeing eyes Fingers hunt and peck in vain to capture such a moment

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/3/2008 5:27:00 PM
Nice use of imagery. Love the last two lines--strong and a thought that writers will connect with. Thank you for taking time to comment on my poem. Keep up the good writing. Karen
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