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Done Deal

[A] DONE DEAL

[A] defeated disgusting man this is.
Disallowed defense because of his disease.
[A] Done deal to compete with the Dogs!
Distribute dinner to him as a better eat of hog maws.

Do not deliberate this as a lost.
[A] Done Deal depletes the prognosis.
Dis Dell do. 
Hair her head to...
[A] Done deal the truth!
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PENNED ON JULY 04, 2014!

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/21/2015 12:47:00 PM

- A: "Honorable Mention" or "A pat on the shoulder" winning title (I do not like: HM :))) - Congratulations on your well written and lovely poem,Verlena ! - I wish you a great weekend! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 2/21/2015 2:16:00 PM

Thanks Anne Lise for your superlative support. Verlena

Skat A

Date: 2/20/2015 11:07:00 PM

Verlena, thank you for the HM..SKAT

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 2/20/2015 11:41:00 PM

For sure Skat... Verlena

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/13/2014 2:58:00 AM

Truly deal having been done Verlena! Congrats on huge win// Upma//

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 7/13/2014 1:25:00 PM

Thanks Upma for your eyes open remarks. Hugs Verlena

Mohan Chutani

Date: 7/13/2014 12:24:00 AM

the truth is a done deal, Verlena. Congrats. Mohan

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 7/13/2014 1:25:00 PM

Thanks Mohan for your collective response... Verlena

Arlene Smith

Date: 7/12/2014 8:52:00 PM

Congrats on a great win, Verlena! Hugs.. Arlene

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 7/12/2014 11:10:00 PM

Thanks Arlene... Verlena

Seren Roberts

Date: 7/12/2014 7:22:00 PM

Congrats on a great write Verlena ....Seren

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 7/12/2014 11:11:00 PM

Thanks Serene for the positivity... Verlena

Joyce Johnson

Date: 7/12/2014 3:39:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this fun poem. Love, Joyce

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 7/12/2014 5:01:00 PM

Thanks Joyce. Verlena

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 7/12/2014 2:43:00 PM

Congratulations Verlena! Nice write..:) like the first stanza..:)

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 7/12/2014 3:04:00 PM

Thanks Olive... Verlena

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/12/2014 8:30:00 AM

This has a rawness that is appealing, congratulations.

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 7/12/2014 1:17:00 PM

Thanks Rick for your supportive remarks... I did something incomprehensible for others to comprehend. Enjoyed doing this alliteration... Verlena :0))s.