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DONE DEAL

[A] DONE DEAL
[A] defeated disgusting man this is. Disallowed defense because of his disease. [A] Done deal to compete with the Dogs! Distribute dinner to him as a better eat of hog maws. Do not deliberate this as a lost. [A] Done Deal depletes the prognosis. Dis Dell do. Hair her head to... [A] Done deal the truth! _________________| PENNED ON JULY 04, 2014!

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Date: 2/21/2015 12:47:00 PM
- A: "Honorable Mention" or "A pat on the shoulder" winning title (I do not like: HM :))) - Congratulations on your well written and lovely poem,Verlena ! - I wish you a great weekend! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 2/21/2015 2:16:00 PM
Thanks Anne Lise for your superlative support. Verlena
Date: 2/20/2015 11:07:00 PM
Verlena, thank you for the HM..SKAT
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 2/20/2015 11:41:00 PM
For sure Skat... Verlena
Date: 7/13/2014 2:58:00 AM
Truly deal having been done Verlena! Congrats on huge win// Upma//
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 7/13/2014 1:25:00 PM
Thanks Upma for your eyes open remarks. Hugs Verlena
Date: 7/13/2014 12:24:00 AM
the truth is a done deal, Verlena. Congrats. Mohan
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 7/13/2014 1:25:00 PM
Thanks Mohan for your collective response... Verlena
Date: 7/12/2014 8:52:00 PM
Congrats on a great win, Verlena! Hugs.. Arlene
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 7/12/2014 11:10:00 PM
Thanks Arlene... Verlena
Date: 7/12/2014 7:22:00 PM
Congrats on a great write Verlena ....Seren
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 7/12/2014 11:11:00 PM
Thanks Serene for the positivity... Verlena
Date: 7/12/2014 3:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this fun poem. Love, Joyce
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 7/12/2014 5:01:00 PM
Thanks Joyce. Verlena
Date: 7/12/2014 2:43:00 PM
Congratulations Verlena! Nice write..:) like the first stanza..:)
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 7/12/2014 3:04:00 PM
Thanks Olive... Verlena
Date: 7/12/2014 8:30:00 AM
This has a rawness that is appealing, congratulations.
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 7/12/2014 1:17:00 PM
Thanks Rick for your supportive remarks... I did something incomprehensible for others to comprehend. Enjoyed doing this alliteration... Verlena :0))s.
Date: 7/12/2014 6:19:00 AM
fabulous alliteration - a well deserved winner Verlena. Hugs Jan xx
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 7/12/2014 1:17:00 PM
Thanks Jan for your supportive remarks... Verlena
Date: 7/12/2014 5:28:00 AM
Lovely penned alliteration, quite meaningful, Verlena. congrats on the win
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 7/12/2014 1:20:00 PM
Thanks for your supporting of this poem Dr. Ram... Verlena