Verlena S. Walker Poet Alliteration

Done Deal

[A] DONE DEAL

[A] defeated disgusting man this is.
Disallowed defense because of his disease.
[A] Done deal to compete with the Dogs!
Distribute dinner to him as a better eat of hog maws.

Do not deliberate this as a lost.
[A] Done Deal depletes the prognosis.
Dis Dell do. 
Hair her head to...
[A] Done deal the truth!
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PENNED ON JULY 04, 2014!

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Anne-Lise Andresen February 21, 2015 at 12:47 PM - A: "Honorable Mention" or "A pat on the shoulder" winning title (I do not like: HM :))) - Congratulations on your well written and lovely poem,Verlena ! - I wish you a great weekend! - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Verlena S. Walker February 21, 2015 at 2:16 PM Thanks Anne Lise for your superlative support. Verlena

Skat A February 20, 2015 at 11:07 PM Verlena, thank you for the HM..SKAT Verlena S. Walker February 20, 2015 at 11:41 PM For sure Skat... Verlena

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 13, 2014 at 2:58 AM Truly deal having been done Verlena! Congrats on huge win// Upma// Verlena S. Walker July 13, 2014 at 1:25 PM Thanks Upma for your eyes open remarks. Hugs Verlena

Mohan Chutani July 13, 2014 at 12:24 AM the truth is a done deal, Verlena. Congrats. Mohan Verlena S. Walker July 13, 2014 at 1:25 PM Thanks Mohan for your collective response... Verlena

Arlene Smith July 12, 2014 at 8:52 PM Congrats on a great win, Verlena! Hugs.. Arlene Verlena S. Walker July 12, 2014 at 11:10 PM Thanks Arlene... Verlena

Seren Roberts July 12, 2014 at 7:22 PM Congrats on a great write Verlena ....Seren Verlena S. Walker July 12, 2014 at 11:11 PM Thanks Serene for the positivity... Verlena

Joyce Johnson July 12, 2014 at 3:39 PM Congratulations on your win with this fun poem. Love, Joyce Verlena S. Walker July 12, 2014 at 5:01 PM Thanks Joyce. Verlena

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 12, 2014 at 2:43 PM Congratulations Verlena! Nice write..:) like the first stanza..:) Verlena S. Walker July 12, 2014 at 3:04 PM Thanks Olive... Verlena

Richard Lamoureux July 12, 2014 at 8:30 AM This has a rawness that is appealing, congratulations. Verlena S. Walker July 12, 2014 at 1:17 PM Thanks Rick for your supportive remarks... I did something incomprehensible for others to comprehend. Enjoyed doing this alliteration... Verlena :0))s.

Jan Allison July 12, 2014 at 6:19 AM fabulous alliteration - a well deserved winner Verlena. Hugs Jan xx Verlena S. Walker July 12, 2014 at 1:17 PM Thanks Jan for your supportive remarks... Verlena

Dr.Ram Mehta July 12, 2014 at 5:28 AM Lovely penned alliteration, quite meaningful, Verlena. congrats on the win Verlena S. Walker July 12, 2014 at 1:20 PM Thanks for your supporting of this poem Dr. Ram... Verlena