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Inspired partly by a weird movie that popped up on Netflix. 

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Two girls were in the country when they found an eerie house with nothing else around. They went inside and then knew right away this was no house where they should ever stay. Old, broken dolls were scattered everywhere. But worse than that was what was living there. It was a giant, ugly-looking man who chased them while grunting. The poor girls ran. He picked them up like toys and clutched them tight, then tossed them all around. They felt such fright. If they should scream, he’d throw them at a wall! He’d feed them if they made no sound at all. He held them both so roughly and he painted their cheeks and lips with rouge. Their lives were tainted. They realized that as dolls he meant to keep them locked up in the dollhouse of the creep. Oct. 17, 2022 for Tania Kitchin's 12-16 Lines Of A Scary Halloween Rhyme Poetry Contest

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Date: 10/31/2022 7:07:00 AM
Gives me the willys Andrea! Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 10/31/2022 2:06:00 AM
Oh, so very creepy Andrea, congratulations.
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Date: 10/30/2022 8:55:00 PM
Spooky, eerie and truly creepy Andrea! Congratulations on your win. Happy Halloween! And stay a safe distance from those dolls!
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Date: 10/30/2022 5:27:00 PM
Barbie and Ken meet Freddy Kruger. Sounds too good to be Netflix inspired. Congratulations on your win, Andrea.
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Date: 10/30/2022 4:30:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on you winning placement with your creepy doll poem!
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Date: 10/18/2022 7:37:00 PM
Very eerie!
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Date: 10/18/2022 6:31:00 PM
Whoa, how did you ever think of this. Creepy.
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Date: 10/18/2022 3:25:00 PM
Great match for the contest, Andrea. You tale quite the scary tale my friend. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Date: 10/17/2022 10:54:00 PM
Nicely done. It is a Halloween kind of story.
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Date: 10/17/2022 8:58:00 PM
Great story , Andrea. Many blessings my friend
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Date: 10/17/2022 4:37:00 PM
Definitely creepy and scary. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Your visit to my page was uplifting.
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Date: 10/17/2022 2:15:00 PM
Creepy and scary as you intended, Andrea. A story well told. Apt for the advent of Halloween.
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Date: 10/17/2022 11:49:00 AM
Scary indeed, Andrea - I predict top honors in the contest - best of luck - Bob H
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Date: 10/17/2022 10:23:00 AM
I expected a happy ending, but maybe one learns to stay away from dilapidated houses. Lovely rhyme.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/17/2022 10:31:00 AM
Usually not a happy ending with a scary story!

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