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Does Anyone Notice

Most of the stuff I do for a reason But today is one of those nonsensical days Where I have not done what I should have And I am not considering changing it up I am lollygagging through my day, Not concerning myself with being aware or awake Did I get enough sleep? Maybe too much. I am groggy with it, as a matter of fact. It is not a feeling I relish, so I have to change it up Figuring it out in a new and different way Pretending to be alive, and fully aware Wondering when someone will notice I have checked out.

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L Milton Hankins

Date: 11/13/2021 9:37:00 AM

We all have our "lollygagging" and nonsensical days, Caren. You are not alone, nor are you out of the ordinary. I think you are, quite frankly, extraordinary!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/14/2021 1:09:00 AM

Hahaha I was feeling guilty at work for not doing enough.

David Kavanagh

Date: 11/13/2021 8:57:00 AM

What's that guys name Caren, oh yeah a certain guy is in the detail here, and he makes work for idle hands, you can be sure he took notice, great word lollygagging I enjoyed this one, cheers David

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/14/2021 1:10:00 AM

I love the word Lollygagging; I shall try to do it again sometime. I did not die doing it.