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Does Anyone Care

Does anyone care? He asked no one. No one did not know, so he consulted someone. Someone said everyone cares. No they don’t! Argued anyone. Of course they do! Someone argued. Pretty soon it was a war with swords and guns. There was devastation; the entire country was in flames. I doubt that you care, the little girl said to her grandpa. Of course I do, said her grandpa. I care a lot! So does grandma. Grandma asked how it all started. But anyone, someone and no one were dead. So no one knew. Written 2-24-2020 Contest: Does Anyone Care? Sponsor: Emile Pinet

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Date: 4/2/2020 12:00:00 AM
You are wonderfully creative ~ I love it!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/2/2020 1:07:00 AM
Thank you P.M. I had a great time with this
Date: 3/26/2020 11:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Hope you are enjoying your win. Have a wonderful day and be safe...............
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/2/2020 1:07:00 AM
Thank you Paula. I appreciate it.
Date: 3/23/2020 8:42:00 AM
Congratulations Caren! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest, it was a very difficult contest to judge but your poem caught my eye with its different approach, well done my friend, Emile.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/23/2020 4:56:00 PM
Thank you Emile. I was astounded and so totally PLEASED and HONORED especially that it was your contest. Thank you so much!
Date: 3/23/2020 3:22:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this prudent observation of yours in your awesome poetic way. God bless you.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/23/2020 4:56:00 PM
Thank you so much. God bless you Beata.
Date: 3/22/2020 9:15:00 PM
Catchy and sad at the same time, Caren. Clever in your portrayal of how easily we pass the buck around, assuming someone "out there" will take care of the world's needs. A well-deserved win, congrats / John
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/22/2020 9:28:00 PM
Thank you so much John. I appreciate your comment.
Date: 3/22/2020 8:37:00 PM
Wow Caren.....this is brilliantly written! Congratulations on your deserving high placement. Bravo! xxoo
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/22/2020 9:28:00 PM
Thank you Connie. I was terribly honored! I still am.
Date: 3/22/2020 1:01:00 PM
wow, pretty deep how you wove all those "ones" into this story. I like this very much and am so please you placed high. Congratulations.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/22/2020 9:29:00 PM
Thank you Andrea. I am humbly accepting this with great glee.
Date: 3/22/2020 11:57:00 AM
Caren, congratulations on your fabulous win. Hugs Eve
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/22/2020 12:01:00 PM
Thank you Eve. I was astounded at my placement.