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Do You Like My Raven Eyes

As I walked down the street this morning I tried to be polite and inconspicuous You stare into my eyes; My brown eyes speak louder than my Husky voice ever will What are you looking for? Do you liked what you see Pain, shame or a sense of connection Love, nowhere to be found It ruthless, it vanishes, it disappoint By now us all know the stories Of lost-love, It begin with a smile A kiss, a warm embrace, Then tear and fears Do you love the raven in my eyes Sorry stranger! I paid my tithes, However, I lost my loves Caw, caw, caw! Do you love the raven in my eyes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/3/2013 10:11:00 PM
Very powerful and great symbols Best, SuZ
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Annie Lander
Date: 4/4/2013 4:57:00 AM
thank you Suzanne

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