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A sexy young lady from Dover Was ready to get her leg over A quick roll in the hay Any time night or day Her boyfriend admits he's in clover 02~28~ 2015 checked with how many syllables 8 8 6 6 8 Contest: Spring forward - Debbie Guzzi ~awarded 6th place~

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Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 3/12/2015 2:04:00 PM

Nice write,Jan.Congrats on your win .

Jan Allison
Date: 3/12/2015 2:17:00 PM

thanks so much for dropping by:-) Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 3/10/2015 3:20:00 PM

Pleased to be back with congratulations, Jan! Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 3/10/2015 3:22:00 PM

Thanks so much Paul - too many contest judged today to comment on all the winners lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 3/9/2015 7:48:00 PM

Very cute, Jan! Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison
Date: 3/10/2015 2:16:00 AM

Thanks Sandra I didn't know it had been judged xx Hugs Jan xx

Cona Adams

Date: 3/3/2015 10:21:00 AM

Too cute, Jan. I love limericks, and the photo brought a belly laugh.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/3/2015 10:25:00 AM

I wrote the limerick and then found the image and I HAD to go with it lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 3/3/2015 12:53:00 AM

witty and funny.. :)! like your humor JAn.. :)! get me some squeeze please... :D! hugs much!//olive eloisa...

Jan Allison
Date: 3/3/2015 2:09:00 AM

Thanks so much Olive always a delight to see you my friend:-) Hugs jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/2/2015 8:16:00 AM

Cute one!

Jan Allison
Date: 3/2/2015 9:48:00 AM

LOL thanks Richard:-) Hugs Jan xx

Viv Wigley

Date: 3/2/2015 1:30:00 AM

Ah, those halogen days of young love..... I can just about manage to raise my eyebrows nowadays :). Great fun, Jan. Viv x

Jan Allison
Date: 3/2/2015 3:23:00 AM

LOL Thanks for the comment Viv:-) Hugs Jan xx

Daver Austin

Date: 3/1/2015 9:52:00 AM

You never know what you may find in a roll in a roll of hay, eh? Good one. Love, daver

Jan Allison
Date: 3/1/2015 10:13:00 AM

LOL Thanks Daver:-) Hugs Jan xx

Jerry T Curtis

Date: 3/1/2015 6:38:00 AM

I'm not sure but, would it be appropriate to say "I think you nailed it" LOL

Jan Allison
Date: 3/1/2015 7:09:00 AM

LOL Jerry if it wasn't for Andrea's suggestion I wouldn't have entered this in the contest - I just changed one word lol Will have to 'lay low' if i don't get placed lol. Hugs Jan xx

Nathan D.

Date: 3/1/2015 2:59:00 AM

very cool limerick. good luck in contest

Jan Allison
Date: 3/1/2015 3:24:00 AM

Thanks so much Nathan:-) Hugs Jan xx

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 3/1/2015 1:50:00 AM

G'day Jan... Crikey Jan, you just keep the laughing gear in action don't you. By the way, condolences with your sad loss Jan. Lindsay

Jan Allison
Date: 3/1/2015 3:24:00 AM

I have always tried to write with humour when I can Lindsay - this took 5 mins to write yesterday:-) Hugs Jan xx

Shane Cooper

Date: 2/28/2015 11:35:00 PM

Dear Nija Naj I am glad to see that you are back in the humor mode and as Debbie said you have the Meter spot on. Take care over the next days, my thoughts are with you.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/1/2015 3:23:00 AM

Thanks Shane:-) Hugs Jan x

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/28/2015 7:14:00 PM

You are really getting the hang of this meter! OR the lay of it? ;) great work! Light & Love

Jan Allison
Date: 2/28/2015 7:22:00 PM

LOL thanks Debbie:-) Hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/28/2015 6:55:00 PM

maybe I misread your email. this is 8 syllables and perfecto!!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/28/2015 7:00:00 PM

Thanks for the advice - i will share any glory with you lol:-) Hugs Jan xx - I am still working on another naughty one lol:-) ha ha ha:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/28/2015 6:49:00 PM

soupmail

Jan Allison
Date: 2/28/2015 6:59:00 PM

replied:-) Hugs Jan xx

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 2/28/2015 6:36:00 PM

lmcso so funny Jan great limerick hugs 7

Jan Allison
Date: 2/28/2015 6:39:00 PM

Thanks Shadow - I have taken on Andrea's suggestion and entered it for the spring contest:-) win or lose it was a fun write:-) lol Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/28/2015 5:34:00 PM

hahaha, and what a GREAT picture to use with it. Hilarious, jan. soupmail. (is this one for the the spring limerick because it is one of your best!! you could say: her boyfriend's in spring clover (and get the word spring into it!)

Jan Allison
Date: 2/28/2015 5:36:00 PM

ooh clever - I never thought of that lol:-) decisions decisions - thanks:-) Hugs jan xxx

Constance La France

Date: 2/28/2015 3:04:00 PM

Jan, what a fun limerick, well done and thanks for visiting my poetry today and my kimo about my father and I know how you can relate to mourning a father, people say time heals but for me the sadness never goes away ...

Jan Allison
Date: 2/28/2015 5:30:00 PM

Guess that is why writing is just such great therapy and so many others can relate to what you say and feel and that gives comfort too:-) Hugs Jan xx

William Gray

Date: 2/28/2015 12:52:00 PM

Hay Jan, great stuff!. hugs.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/28/2015 1:02:00 PM

Thanks William:-) Hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/28/2015 12:38:00 PM

downright heelarious.. great one, jan.. huggs

Jan Allison
Date: 2/28/2015 1:02:00 PM

Thanks Nette:-) Hugs Jan xx Despite my sadness i still write with humour when I can:-) xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/28/2015 11:30:00 AM

- O.M.G ..... love the text for the fun image , dear Jan ... :)))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 2/28/2015 11:48:00 AM

I am so pleased I made you smile Anne Lise - we both need humour in our life:-) Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 2/28/2015 11:00:00 AM

Isn't that what he told her!: Roll me over in the clover!!:) Very funny:) I fancy a roll too...stuffed with cheese and salami!! hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 2/28/2015 11:16:00 AM

As you can see Paul my muse is all over the place at the moment lol - but no tears am actually strangely calm at the moment. I am going to have to have a track for the funeral on continual play for 3 days as it makes me cry - so will run out of tears on the day lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

James Fraser

Date: 2/28/2015 10:35:00 AM

You've made me chuckle with this Limerick Jan, nice one, hugs, James xx

Jan Allison
Date: 2/28/2015 10:39:00 AM

Thanks James I do try and do fun writes when I can:-) Hugs Jan xx

Janet Eaton

Date: 2/28/2015 10:34:00 AM

Oh Jan this is so cute. Made me smile. 7. Hugs Janet

Jan Allison
Date: 2/28/2015 10:38:00 AM

Thanks for dropping by Janet:-) Hugs Jan xx

Kp Nunez

Date: 2/28/2015 10:32:00 AM

Lol! i should notify the father of the lass to come with his shotgun and collar the son-of-a-gun! Just great, Jan!!. Again a 7! PS. Forgive me my friend, I have inadvertently deleted your comment for my latest post STILL IN LOVE WITH YOU cause I had to delete the extra submission. So sad :(. Hope this won't stop you next time...

Jan Allison
Date: 2/28/2015 10:45:00 AM

LOL I wrote the poem and when I found the pic I just had to go with it lol:-) Hugs Jan x

Jan Allison
Date: 2/28/2015 10:37:00 AM

I will comment again Kim -I saw the poem had been posted about 5 times:-) Hugs Jan xx