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Do Not Weep Over His Demise

Do Not Weep Over His Demise He did his very best and failed He was soon done, color him gone With hidden sword he was impaled Lucky his skull was solid bone. Do not weep over his demise He was just skin and sickly bones Well maybe a few special cries Moaned out in convincing tones. At his vacant spot post this sign He was here, now has departed My, how he gabbed and opined Left with nothing, brokenhearted. He did his very best and failed Forgot how to play, his great crimes Away, on sinking ship he sailed With nothing but old and sad rhymes. Robert J. Lindley, 1-27-2017 Form- Lin-Crazy Eights, Rhyme, 100 words. Syllables Per Line: 8 8 8 8 8 8 8 8 8 8 8 8 8 8 8 8 Total # Syllables: 128 Total # Words: 100

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Date: 1/29/2017 4:04:00 AM
Oh! I would love to try it, Robert:) it must be 16 lines with 8 syllables in each line, am I right? I don't understand this 100 words stuff, could you explain?
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Date: 1/28/2017 5:20:00 AM
I like this form, Robert and the content too:) yeah, there are many people who'll cry and complain their whole lives, without the joy of the Lord:(
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Robert Lindley
Date: 1/28/2017 1:24:00 PM
Thanks my friend. Would be great and an honor to see your poem written in this form..
Date: 1/28/2017 4:36:00 AM
Wow, Robert, I really like this form, just flows so well and so beautifully!
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Robert Lindley
Date: 1/28/2017 1:22:00 PM
Thank you my friend... I had great fun writing it, too. Would be great and an honor to see your poem written in this form.

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