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Alarm rings loud I am still sleepy Why must I now get up My dream is sweet It must continue Will Johnny Depp kiss me I must stay down With my eyes both closed Does the world now need me Do not like up So rude and abrupt Is there still some coffee
... CayCay October 17, 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/26/2015 1:12:00 AM
Well done, CayCay, I've got the kettle on. Viv x
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Date: 10/26/2015 12:22:00 AM
Back again to congratulate you on your win, CayCay. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 10/25/2015 10:34:00 PM
Hi Cay Cay: Great Write. Dream on!
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Date: 10/25/2015 9:44:00 PM
CayCay - congrats on your win.
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Date: 10/25/2015 6:38:00 PM
Congratulations CayCay.
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Date: 10/25/2015 5:21:00 PM
I really liked your set, Caycay! Congrats on the winners' list.
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Date: 10/25/2015 4:34:00 PM
Great one, CayCay! I can relate to this! Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 10/25/2015 1:37:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats CayCay:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/25/2015 1:21:00 PM
I liked this sleepy piece, congratulations Cay Cay.
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 10/25/2015 3:16:00 PM
Hey, Richard - thank you for sponsoring such a fun contest! CayCay
Date: 10/25/2015 12:24:00 PM
CayCay nice win!!!!
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Date: 10/23/2015 9:51:00 AM
Hhahaha with my permission, that dream can continue after the coffee or vice versa:-)
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Date: 10/21/2015 5:32:00 PM
Ha!!... I feel your pain!!.. ;-) good luck on the contest, sweetness...
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Date: 10/21/2015 5:04:00 PM
My feelings exactly, CayCay! Love the way your expressed this! All the best for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 10/21/2015 1:31:00 AM
I can smell coffee-- cups wake up and make themselves self percolating can they work for me I will keep the bed real warm... bring home the bacon! I love this style here CayCay!!! (#7)
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Date: 10/21/2015 1:32:00 AM
The replies don't keep them formatted in the haiku style I typed them in. They're in there! :)
Date: 10/20/2015 3:00:00 PM
How dare a dream interupt any dreamy kiss ;-) love this CayCay, smiles, James :)
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 10/20/2015 4:48:00 PM
I know, right? I'm laughing at how I said that, but you can't hear me and that's makes me plain silly right now. Thank you, James, for your sweet comments ... CayCay
Date: 10/18/2015 7:28:00 PM
so cute. how dare the alarm interrupt a kiss from Johnny Depp!!
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Date: 10/19/2015 5:44:00 PM
Exactly - especially when he was in his pirate clothes! Thanks, Andrea ... CayCay
Date: 10/18/2015 3:02:00 PM
Hello Sweet Friend: well this is relatable to any night owl who's earned her wings. I am going to have to look up genere Questionku. I'm not familiar with this form but it looks fun! I was there with you wanting to sleep, wanting the coffee but, you can keep the Depp. Ha! E. Nau (no not Asian...French, pronounced "No").
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 10/19/2015 5:46:00 PM
Hey, be patient with me - a message is coming as soon as I get it from my head into written word. Thanks for letting me keep Depp - now we just need to let him know! Luv ya - CayCay
Date: 10/18/2015 4:00:00 AM
Previously unfamiliar with this style, but you have pulled it off really well, Cay Cay. Good luck in the contest, Viv x
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Date: 10/19/2015 5:43:00 PM
Thanks, Viv - CayCay
Date: 10/17/2015 10:29:00 PM
Johnny Depp? CayCay I really question your taste or rather was this a nightmare instead of a dream ; ). Clever wee Questionku
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 10/18/2015 12:46:00 PM
How uuuuuuu doin'? Oh, yes, most certainly and of course, pedophile or no, I lust that man. He need never talk, just let me stare at him! (This does not include when his head is bald) Put on that pirate gear and .. oh, what are we discussing? Yes, of course, I am here to thank you and I do ... CayCay
Date: 10/17/2015 4:05:00 PM
Cheers, with some cappo, Cay! You did well with 'ku and you have Rick's word for it. No need for luck then. Here's hoping you get high placement! hugs!
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 10/19/2015 5:44:00 PM
Thank you, Kim - returning the hug ... CayCay
Date: 10/17/2015 8:05:00 AM
Thanks for entering my contest. You picked up the form nicely. ;0) I'm impressed.
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Date: 10/17/2015 9:17:00 AM
It was fun and I got to spend 'time' with Johnny Depp. Thanks for having a contest, Richard ... CayCay
Date: 10/17/2015 7:06:00 AM
engrossed by this wonderful; qu, cay!.. huggs
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 10/19/2015 5:47:00 PM
Thank you, Nette - I showed you mine, now I want to find yours! I always enjoy reading 'yours' ... CayCay
Date: 10/17/2015 6:01:00 AM
Enjoy your dream and it would be tea for me - love the humour here CayCay good luck:-) hugs Jan xx
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 10/19/2015 6:00:00 PM
Oh Caycay there are so many people I would love to drink tea with from the site - I am meeting up again with Paul Callus - he is such a delightful gentleman when we met we felt we had known each other for many years:-) hugs Jan xx
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 10/19/2015 5:48:00 PM
I'll heat the tea, come any time and laugh with me ... CayCay
Date: 10/17/2015 5:34:00 AM
Savor the coffee and the dream..Enjoyed reading your work..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 10/19/2015 5:49:00 PM
I am so glad you enjoyed it, Sara, and that you told me ... CayCay
Date: 10/17/2015 4:27:00 AM
What dream CayCay. Maybe the coffee will make it up to you. Not. lol Greatest luck in contest.
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Date: 10/19/2015 5:50:00 PM
I do love coffee. I need coffee. I really do sing 'why must I get up' often and frequently. You're the best, Michael ... CayCay