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Do Not Disturb the Night

Long doors of dark have closed upon the day And though the wind will batter till the knuckles bleed It cannot presume to summon morning dawn Or lift relentless bars, to welcome sun The light is pillowed deep in slumber’s grip Do not disturb is hung upon the knob Unwelcoming, while daybreak still is sleeping And earth takes respite from the busy day And dreaming stars are breathing silent sighs Whisper softly, tiptoe gently Take care, thus not break the spell You cannot speed, the night must sleep The clock ticks on, and patience is the friend Withhold the futile beating hand Grow wise in silence and keep the peace So when the dawn comes by to let you in Much brighter still, it comes to greet A welcome mat beneath your feet Unlocked and free to enter as you please Companioned by a warm serenity

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/23/2011 12:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Debbie Guzzi's contest "Free Verse Seriously". A well deserved win Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/15/2011 6:15:00 PM
Carrie, congratulations on winning in the contest with this entry. I don't know why I did not see this one earlier.
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Date: 2/15/2011 10:11:00 AM
i must say i hope i have these sorts of nights Carrie, and also such dawns that i may gain something from such experience have enjoyed and congratulations on the win.
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Date: 2/14/2011 4:18:00 PM
Dear Carrie, Congratulations on your grand Ist Place Win in the contest! Truly enjoyed this beauty. Love, Annalise
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Date: 2/12/2011 2:10:00 PM
Hi Carrie - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in Debbie's contest! Best wishes, Kory
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Date: 2/12/2011 1:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your first placement with this stunning poem, just beautiful as usual~~
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Date: 2/12/2011 2:47:00 AM
myteriouslt beautiful , clap.. clap for the great win, crrie..:) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/11/2011 9:21:00 PM
Cool contrast between dawn and night, Carrie. A well deserved win. You are one of Soup's free verse masters! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 2/11/2011 8:23:00 PM
So beautiful and vivid. Many congratulations for this success.
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Date: 2/11/2011 7:24:00 PM
I'm proud to be second behind you. Congratulations! RAY
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Date: 2/11/2011 5:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 2/11/2011 4:35:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your first place win in Debbie's contest... enjoy with luv.. for a grand write ..
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Date: 2/10/2011 11:03:00 AM
Very nice poem Carrie...Jimmy
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Date: 2/10/2011 9:59:00 AM
I really like this, Carrie-- you speak of wisdom here and I think we all could take notes from this beautiful poem-- I almost feel like whispering lest I disturb the night-- wonderful message you have here :) enjoyed it very much-- hugs-- nikko :)
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Date: 2/9/2011 3:56:00 PM
Good luck in the contest with this one..Sara
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Date: 2/9/2011 3:26:00 PM
beautiful poetic expressions with equally beautiful images, Carrie
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Date: 2/9/2011 2:02:00 PM
this poem is so unbelievably beautiful!
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Date: 2/9/2011 1:51:00 PM
this is lovely
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