Do Not Disturb the Night

Long doors of dark have closed upon the day
And though the wind will batter till the knuckles bleed
It cannot presume to summon morning dawn
Or lift relentless bars, to welcome sun

The light is pillowed deep in slumber’s grip
Do not disturb is hung upon the knob
Unwelcoming, while daybreak still is sleeping
And earth takes respite from the busy day
And dreaming stars are breathing silent sighs
Whisper softly, tiptoe gently
Take care, thus not break the spell
You cannot speed, the night must sleep
The clock ticks on, and patience is the friend  
Withhold the futile beating hand
Grow wise in silence and keep the peace
So when the dawn comes by to let you in
Much brighter still, it comes to greet
A welcome mat beneath your feet
Unlocked and free to enter as you please
Companioned by a warm serenity
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
February 23, 2011 at 12:29 PM
Congratulations on your win in Debbie Guzzi's contest "Free Verse Seriously". A well deserved win Carrie. Love, Carol
Pettit Avatar
February 15, 2011 at 6:15 PM
Carrie, congratulations on winning in the contest with this entry. I don't know why I did not see this one earlier.
Maverick Avatar
February 15, 2011 at 10:11 AM
i must say i hope i have these sorts of nights Carrie, and also such dawns that i may gain something from such experience have enjoyed and congratulations on the win.
Haick Avatar
February 14, 2011 at 4:18 PM
Dear Carrie, Congratulations on your grand Ist Place Win in the contest! Truly enjoyed this beauty. Love, Annalise
Calhoun Avatar
February 12, 2011 at 2:10 PM
Hi Carrie - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in Debbie's contest! Best wishes, Kory
La France Avatar
February 12, 2011 at 1:20 PM
Congratulations on your first placement with this stunning poem, just beautiful as usual~~
Onclaud Avatar
February 12, 2011 at 2:47 AM
myteriouslt beautiful , clap.. clap for the great win, crrie..:) huggs, nette
Dietrich Avatar
February 11, 2011 at 9:21 PM
Cool contrast between dawn and night, Carrie. A well deserved win. You are one of Soup's free verse masters! Luv, Andrea
Mannan Avatar
February 11, 2011 at 8:23 PM
So beautiful and vivid. Many congratulations for this success.
Dillard Avatar
February 11, 2011 at 7:24 PM
I'm proud to be second behind you. Congratulations! RAY
Kendrick Avatar
February 11, 2011 at 5:03 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Sweetheart Avatar
February 11, 2011 at 4:35 PM
Congrats Carrie on your first place win in Debbie's contest... enjoy with luv.. for a grand write ..
Anderson Avatar
February 10, 2011 at 11:03 AM
Very nice poem Carrie...Jimmy
K. Avatar
February 10, 2011 at 9:59 AM
I really like this, Carrie-- you speak of wisdom here and I think we all could take notes from this beautiful poem-- I almost feel like whispering lest I disturb the night-- wonderful message you have here :) enjoyed it very much-- hugs-- nikko :)
Kendrick Avatar
February 9, 2011 at 3:56 PM
Good luck in the contest with this one..Sara
Mehta Avatar
February 9, 2011 at 3:26 PM
beautiful poetic expressions with equally beautiful images, Carrie
Spicer Avatar
February 9, 2011 at 2:02 PM
this poem is so unbelievably beautiful!
Roberts Avatar
February 9, 2011 at 1:51 PM
this is lovely
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