Do I

Do I Do I deserve a full happy life Do I require sacrifice Do I do what everyone wants Do I know what is good for me Look at the word do it is the future in you Do I should I will I make wake up Do I is frustration at its core I am so much more

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/27/2017 6:52:00 PM

You should do what you want to do..without nobody demanding what you should do...Do You? DO I? The world is a very demanding world isnt it? :)

Niall Fulham
Date: 4/28/2017 10:29:00 AM

Hi Charmaine, thanks for comment , yes it is demanding and even more so if your the giving type :))) Hugs

Debbie Duncan

Date: 4/26/2017 2:54:00 AM

Well done

Niall Fulham
Date: 4/26/2017 11:12:00 AM

Hi Debbie , thanks :))) Hugs I do:))))

Armani Armania

Date: 4/24/2017 7:51:00 PM

Don't doubt, be happy your way anyway :))

Niall Fulham
Date: 4/25/2017 7:05:00 AM

Hi Marina, thanks for comment and for reading between the lines :))) hugs

Edward Mccall

Date: 4/14/2017 8:54:00 PM

Hard questions asked with a strong answer at the end well done Niall.

Niall Fulham
Date: 4/15/2017 3:40:00 AM

Hi Edward, thanks for comment :)