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Dizzy My Friend

Dizzy my friend started out tall and handsome he made his way all the way from Branson, now living in a casino city the sunshine imbedded in his neck has turned gritty, his bright white long hair runs down to his Jean coat pockets with flare, Dizzy my friend shuffles his hands and feet he gets attention because he wants more meat, he’s not a puzzle to solve he’s a man that is just involved, walking and dancing are his thing come on Dizzy now you can sing, what a guy what a friend I will defend you until the end. Date: 8-23-2019 Written Third Place  9/7/2019  Bring a character to life “Dizzy My Friend”  Contest Judged  9/7/2019  Sponsored by: Richard Lamoureux

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Date: 9/8/2019 8:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your top placement Paula!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/12/2019 6:49:00 PM
Thank You, for your note. I have been away & did not know about my poem.
Date: 9/8/2019 12:54:00 AM
Thanks for entering my contest. Congrats on your win.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/12/2019 6:43:00 PM
I have been away. What a wonderful surprise to win. It was fun to write. Thank You, for writing to me.
Date: 8/26/2019 2:16:00 AM
haha, hehe, I am dizzy... this guy sounds like the man I worked for..years ago. He was a character also. hugs. A fun write. Ann
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/26/2019 9:56:00 AM
I also worked for Dizzy. Thanks for writing.......

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