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The Metaphysics of Human Connection and Existence Poetry Contest n/a

11/10/23

Poem Of The Day

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Dizygotic Twins -POTD

I travel back to a nascent time,
when bairn girl sojourner twins arrived.
Born from their earth mother’s womb, 
embodied by Mother Nature’s bosom.
Goddesses embraced by the Universe.
Dualism beyond the physical world
Their essence of silvery stars, 
sends love’s chemical reactions.
Their beatific smiles so warm and inviting,
and magical thinking inspires all.
Illuminating pure energy that soars from your light,
spreads wildly around, igniting the night.
The delightful bond inside you both, heaven's call.
Qualities, talent, and intuition divine, 
Their existence, always sunshine.
Inseparable even when miles apart 
They're always in each other’s hearts.
You’re always here in mine.
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Goldsmith Avatar
December 29, 2023 at 10:20 AM
Congratulations on being on the "100 Best New Poems" list for Soup. A wonderful write. Have a great/wonderful day/2024 writing away.................
Anaya Avatar
July 28, 2024 at 3:44 PM
Oh my, I hadn't checked the list, Paula. Belated TY!
Nicole Avatar
November 12, 2023 at 5:05 PM
Dear Anaya, this is so beautifully expressed and presented. My mother is a fraternal twin, and it's amazing how different they are, but similar in so many ways. Your thoughts curl softly around me and my heart. Congratulations my sweet friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Anaya Avatar
November 14, 2023 at 7:28 AM
So many twin stories here, all just amazing! Thank you, dear Brandy! Xhugs-Anaya
Volumes Avatar
November 11, 2023 at 10:43 PM
Wow I never look at POTD's Congratulations. This is an amazing poem Anaya. Rings true to me as my sons are dizygotic twins. One looks like my side of the family the other takes after my husband's side in appearance, different as chalk and cheese, always have been, but always have each other's back in times of need. Your poem brings tears to my eyes remembering the times the bond they have shone through. Your wonderful nieces will be lucky to have each other right through their lives. Your poem is something I am sure they will keep throughout their lives. it will mean much. Its beautiful as are you.
Anaya Avatar
November 12, 2023 at 8:59 AM
Awe, thank you, SV!
Wolf Avatar
November 11, 2023 at 5:39 PM
Dizygotic can be so exotic: I know such twins with over 36 cms separating them in height, and even with very different skintones... Congrats on your enchanting POTD, Anaya!! :) gw
Anaya Avatar
November 11, 2023 at 6:19 PM
Thank you, Gershon!
Lawrence Avatar
November 11, 2023 at 8:44 AM
Belated congratulations on your lovely POTD dear Anaya. Love emanates from your pen. Such adoration and words that bring forth magic and spirit and future all in one. Love this, especially~ Illuminating pure energy that soars from your light. Hugs to you, Susan :)
Anaya Avatar
November 11, 2023 at 8:59 AM
Thank you, Susan! I'm delighted. xhugsx ~Anaya
Seeker Avatar
November 11, 2023 at 12:10 AM
A beautifully penned dedication, Anaya ~ warmest congratulations on POTD
Anaya Avatar
November 11, 2023 at 8:23 AM
Thank you, Unseeking seeker! x
Toney Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 11:30 PM
What a delightful tribute to your twin nieces. Congratulations on Poem of the Day!
Anaya Avatar
November 11, 2023 at 8:22 AM
Thank you, Mark!
Poet Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 5:26 PM
Anaya, a magnificent homage bestowed upon the cherubic pair of newborns. Your poetic composition is truly mesmerizing. Furthermore, I extend my heartfelt for the POTD honor. Blessings
Anaya Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 5:42 PM
cherubic angels, it is the right angle for the the Metaphysics of Human Connection and Existence Poetry Contest. Thank you, Sotto Poet for your wonderful comments and congratulations, I am honored. xhugs
Gorelick Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 4:15 PM
An undeniable and unimpeachably original endearing tribute to your much-loved nieces, written with elegant lyricism to match your sentiment. Congratulations on POTD Anaya! Well-deserved, Robert
Anaya Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 4:27 PM
Happy Veterans Day! Thank you for your service Robert!!!:D
Anaya Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 4:26 PM
Oh, wow three Veterans in a row! (All three Navy if I'm not mistaken). Awe, thank you Robert always kind and encouraging comments. One of a kind.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 8:51 AM
Congratulations on POTD
Rodrigues Avatar
November 13, 2023 at 6:55 PM
Thank you <3
Anaya Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 3:26 PM
Happy Veterans Day! Thank you for your service Kimmy!!!
Anaya Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 10:49 AM
Thank you, Kim!
Baker Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 8:45 AM
Back to congratulate you on your POTD, Anaya! WTG! Enjoy your special day of recognition, my friend. Bill
Anaya Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 3:30 PM
Happy Veterans Day! Thank you for your service, Bill!!! :D
Anaya Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 10:48 AM
Awe thank you, Bill for all of your encouragement and delightful comments! My friend from Texas :)
Jones Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 8:20 AM
Congratulations on your well penned potd!
Anaya Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 8:42 AM
Hi sweet Karen. Thank you! For my nieces. xhugs ~Anaya
Messina Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 7:45 AM
Beautiful writing, Anaya. A Twin-kle of delight! Congratulations on POTD! Hugs Charlie
Anaya Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 8:13 AM
Thank you, Charlie! Very nice, xhugs Anaya
Bowring Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 7:24 AM
Dear Anaya, many congratulations on a very worthy POTD. How beautiful is this! Such exquisite lines to read over and over. One line in particular really grabbed me,’ Their essence of silvery stars’ - gorgeous. The last few lines are so touching and so true - I’m a twin too! So, this delightful, masterpiece is very poignant. My beloved twin is 15 mins older and unlike dear Inky, we are not identical in appearance but we do have a lot of the same characteristics and I’m so blessed with her.
Anaya Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 7:33 AM
Love it. Thanks for sharing your precious twin story with us. My nieces Ariel & Ivy are fraternal like you. I'm delighted that you found my poem touching, I really appreciate your thoughts, always Christina! And for the fave...I'm enjoying with all of you. xhugsx ~Anaya
Bowring Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 7:26 AM
She’s my other half. Thank you so much for this beautifully written gem and it’s a fav for me too! Hugs and smiles to you. Enjoy your celebratory day xx :):)
Buhagiar Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 7:09 AM
Congratulations on your POTD. Blessings
Anaya Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 7:18 AM
Thank you, my friend Victor. Have a lovely day!
Goldsmith Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 6:28 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. What a wonderful write. Enjoy your day/win with blessings...............
Anaya Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 7:13 AM
Thank you Paula, much appreciated x!
Andresen Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 6:22 AM
- Congratulations on your wonderful p.o.t.d. ... a pleasure to read, Anaya :) - hugs
Anaya Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 7:14 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise! xhugsx
Fowler Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 6:11 AM
Fabulous bff. This is such a sweet poem. Congratulations on the honor of your POTD! :)
Anaya Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 8:12 AM
...until the dawn...dance da da da da...spin that record! Lady Gaga
Fowler Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 7:20 AM
Dance, dance, dance until...!
Anaya Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 7:17 AM
Thank you, my bff! I'm delighted, spinning around the room, lol. xhugs Linda ~Anaya
Empress Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 5:44 AM
Congratulations on Receiving POTD. Well deserved
Anaya Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 7:09 AM
Thank you, a twin yourself! Xhugs:)
Ray Choudhury Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 5:16 AM
Congratulations on your receiving POTD, Dear Friend and Exquisite Poetess. Loved your poem, read a couple of times - your choice of words is masterfully blended with the form - Free Verse is my favourite. I don't have any experience with twins - great to know how much joy and fulfillment they brought to you! Love and Hugs ~ Mala
Anaya Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 6:51 AM
Malabika thank you. It's a complete surprise. I so am grateful for your honest and wonderful thoughts and comment. I too like the freedom of free verse, it might even feel more like poetry. Still experimenting. Thank you my good friend. Love & Hugs :)
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 4:37 AM
CONGRATULATIONS on the POTD Anaya. Beautiful, deep and touching poem. Enjoy your well deserved awarded day!
Anaya Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 6:47 AM
Good morning Maria, thank you for your thoughts and your congratulations. xhugs ~Anaya
Buhagiar Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 1:26 AM
Great tribute to the newly born twins. Loved the poem. Blessings.
Anaya Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 9:25 AM
Thank you, Victor! Blessings to you
One Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 6:18 PM
Lovely poem and dedication dear Anaya..
Anaya Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 9:24 AM
Thank you, SO...good to see you always!
Baker Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 2:36 PM
Lovely poetry, Anaya. Your imagery and descriptions are heartwarming. People always thought my older sister and I were twins growing up, until High School. We looked a lot alike and were both musical and extroverts. I went steady with twins my senior year in high school, they always had to have the same thing. One was an extrovert, the other one was an introvert. Linda & Lee. What a pair. Whoa, a little off topic. LOL Have a pleasant day, Bill
Anaya Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 6:38 AM
Thank you, Bill. Brother & sister look-a-likes is practically twins. How nice, what a pair! xhugs
Empress Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 10:21 AM
Ah this touched my heart, because i am a twin, i have an identical twin sister who is five minutes younger than me, and we are inseparable and even if we are not physically together we are always connected , and there have been few times weve actually felt each other when somethings going wrong while not together, its a very strong connection, and i cant imagine my life without her, she means everything to me. I really love how beautiful and celestial your word weaving is! Fave for me for sure
Anaya Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 10:51 AM
Love it. Your story about twin shenanigans are just too fun, like out of a movie. Isn't it great, too cute mummy two! Yes, I do, always ~Anaya
Empress Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 10:34 AM
Theres ups n downs of being twins haha. Growing up we used to fool teachers, switch classes.. But we dont like it when sometimes people confuse us, so i have blonde hair and she has black hair. Just so that it would help people to tell us apart; my son calls her “ mummy two” and we are always together we travel together too. But we have very different personalities. She is more of an extrovert. Im an introvert: she is also a poet tho: thank you for trustn me grateful
Anaya Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 10:26 AM
Oh, Ink, thank you so much for sharing that you are a twin. How sweet, adorable you two sound. That is so special, I've always wondered how it would feel to have a twin. They are fraternal, but same as you both they are inseparable! Thank you, I trust you and believe you when you say you like a poem...thanks for the fave!
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