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Diy Factory

My factory makes factories; I make them all day by the score: a flat pack kit, instructions clear - you leap in through the floating door and build that factory from in- side out. And  tell the world that your new factory makes factories. They're selling fast - there's more and more... Reviews are good; I've got five stars  (if someone slates me, please ignore). For Caren's 'Willy Wonka is not here' contest

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Date: 5/20/2020 8:16:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your contest entry. This reads like a pyramid scheme. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 5/19/2020 2:27:00 AM
Love this, Jack, so fresh and creative...Stay Safe my friend..
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Date: 5/15/2020 5:22:00 PM
You have created a creative creation, Jack :) I award you 5 stars, too :) Regards // paul
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Date: 5/14/2020 12:27:00 AM
Great poem Jack. I couldn't think of anything for this contest. Than you for your nice words. Joyce
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Date: 5/13/2020 6:21:00 PM
love your wit Jack! Good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/13/2020 4:20:00 PM
Very original and clever - I like the humor here!
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