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Divorce and Remorse

Two hearts became one Now they follow different paths – Divorce with remorse He complained constantly of my cooking Café reservations always booking Said I drove him insane But boy did he complain When I left for someone better looking The complaining has stopped, but the house is so quiet So I pick up the phone, invite him for a riot Haiku, limerick and couplet for the Divorce Club contest

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/9/2010 8:44:00 PM

This was really good. I hope it placed high in the contest. Looks LIke I forgot to congratulate this deserving win. LUv, Andrea

Marilyn Hernandez

Date: 12/3/2010 1:36:00 AM

"But boy did he complain, When I left for someone better looking"...HILARIOUS! Lovely touch and such wonderful flow. I enjoyed this very much! Congrats on your win!

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 12/2/2010 3:08:00 PM

A nice one Diane, congrats to you also...luv Michael

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/2/2010 12:57:00 PM

Soup mail, please. and congratulations on this win sharing with me, Diane

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 12/2/2010 9:21:00 AM

lol, love the end line, good set, they tell as story, enjoyed this, congrats on your win:)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/2/2010 7:14:00 AM

Diane) Congratulations! With your awesome 3some of 3 differ forms. I had lots of fun reading every entry. I was surprised every one pulled off a beautiful and amazing Job to my request. lol,, and the whole time I thought it was going to be a tough contest,...p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/2/2010 6:40:00 AM

Congrats Diane on your big win in P.D.'s great contest on divorce with this brilliant write and entry luv.. enjoy another top ten win today with lots of luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/2/2010 5:58:00 AM

Congratulations Diane for your win in P.D.'s "Divorce Club Contest". Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/2/2010 5:25:00 AM

Good Morning Diane. I am stopping by to thank you for your kind comments. They mean the world to me. I always enjoy reading your fasinating poetry. Wishing you and yours the Happiest of Holidays. Love, Carol

James Fraser

Date: 11/30/2010 2:38:00 PM

haha, nice one Diane. I was picturing the scenes as I read. Good luck in the contest >> James :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 11/30/2010 8:20:00 AM

Have not been divorced but come close to it some days. ha ha Good luck in the contest . Thank you for all your kind comments. Have a great day. Phyl

Linda Milgate

Date: 11/29/2010 2:22:00 PM

What a riot! Loved it. Great job.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/29/2010 7:00:00 AM

A well deserved featured poem you have here Diane. May you have many more. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/28/2010 5:43:00 PM

Congrats Diane on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great one to share with us all my friend.. on this happy Sunday with luv..

Joyce Johnson

Date: 11/26/2010 7:19:00 PM

Should be a winner. I haven't tackled this one as I have not been divorced. I know it is traumatic under any circumstance. Love, Joyce

Adell Foster

Date: 11/26/2010 5:54:00 PM

LOL, Diane this a great entry, your ending couplet is a hoot ;-) Good Luck in the contest. Adell

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/26/2010 3:34:00 PM

Reads like a winner..Good luck in the contest....I appreciate the kind comments on my work "Come In My Love"..Thanks for stopping by ...Sara

Wilma Neels

Date: 11/26/2010 11:39:00 AM

hehe, Diane, what a witty set you have here.. I enjoyed each one... Wishing you all the best in Pd's contest and thank you for your kind comment, it made me smile while reading.. Hope you will have a splendid weekend :-) love Wilma

Skat A

Date: 11/25/2010 8:01:00 PM

I LOVE ALL 3, GOOD LUCK,, best holiday wishes*Luv~Skat

Date: 11/25/2010 9:12:00 AM

Hi Diane,I really enjoyed this witty, creative write.Good luck in the contest! and thanks for commenting on my poem. Sandra

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/24/2010 10:45:00 PM

i truly dig this clever and punky write, diane.. i loved the way the story ended, hahaha! a gem of a poem that will rate high in the contest! thanks for coming around my page and sending me such warm notes... nette

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 11/24/2010 6:23:00 PM

Amazing and beautiful. Witty and sad too. You have created a great limerick showing the depths of love which resulted in a divorce for a thing like cooking. My good wishes for its grand success in the contest and thank you for your kind and precious comments on my poem 'Pleasure of Moving on Moon'. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra......Diane Locksley

Joe Flach

Date: 11/24/2010 4:31:00 PM

Nicely written, Diane. Even the title is witty and telling. The three different styles fit together nicely with a common theme and continuity. This should do very well in the contest. Nice job. Joe

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/24/2010 3:36:00 PM

Happy thanksgiving with this nice entry for the divorce club, Diane

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/24/2010 3:08:00 PM

hahaha, I love that last couplet. YOu still need a RIOT in your quiet house! The limerick was a gas too. LUv, Andrea