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Summer's Burden

Summertime ago, this marked my heart. and I was young, perhaps full of myself Vanity and pride, my own burdens as I walked again beneath that cypress, and the oak, I seem to see friend's footsteps everywhere, remembering those words we'd spoken. Regrets like pale morning dew, muddy with each new heated drop all my yesterdays anger wilted and forlorn... One last glance, where happiness once was mine yet I chose rage instead of warmth this silent treatment broke the unbroken bond... as I gently fall again into kinship's darkest twilight time. Eve Roper's Contest: Summer Day 9/9/2017

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Date: 9/18/2017 6:23:00 PM
congrats, Nette!
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Date: 9/18/2017 3:04:00 PM
Congrats Nette :)
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Date: 9/18/2017 10:50:00 AM
Wonderful write Nette, especially the last line, congratulations...
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Date: 9/18/2017 12:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Nette.
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Date: 9/17/2017 5:43:00 PM
Thank you, Nette, for entering my contest. .... Congratulations on your win... Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 9/17/2017 3:13:00 PM
Congrats nette!
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Date: 9/10/2017 5:39:00 PM
Fascinating work which makes me feel the romp of summer!
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Date: 9/10/2017 5:34:00 PM
Those were the good ole younger days which your astounding poetry brightly conveyed!
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Date: 9/9/2017 9:03:00 PM
Nette, many lovely images! GL in contest!
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Date: 9/9/2017 12:36:00 PM
Well penned in beautiful words as always--good work--good luck nette!
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Date: 9/9/2017 11:27:00 AM
What a glorious and inspirational write my friend! You have surely written such a magnificent poem! I enjoyed your poem of running through puddles and playing in them, reminds me of my childhood Nette! I truly loved reading your delightful piece here this afternoon! What a tremendous poem, Great Work!
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Date: 9/9/2017 11:12:00 AM
nice! i actually saw some children playing in the puddles; well written and absorbing for that happy moment. cheers!
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