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Diving Through Heat of Summer

A sudden flashflood gushed along the street, That I wiggled out , romping and playing In my cotton undershirt as summer cooled, To allow a downpour of monsoon rain. Swerving through puddles where debris Gathered around little guys' feet, Our lithe bodies slip-skidded, glided On a roller-coaster ride of muddy suds... what fun! Then, I picked dingy ferns and thickets coiled by reeds, Merrily laughing past waters, unclear… Till Mom and Dad yelled from the gate, " Joey , clean up...” O kids’ games of bubble-pop hastened my blush. Then soft winds crooned among the trees Where only spellbound laughter can recall This dreamy , whimsical atmosphere: A time to reel, To cherish the frolic during the heat of summer glee Which spangled my boyhood sprees aloft! Eve Roper's Contest: Hot Summer Day 9/9/2017

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Date: 9/18/2017 6:23:00 PM
congrats, Nette!
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Date: 9/18/2017 3:04:00 PM
Congrats Nette :)
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Date: 9/18/2017 10:50:00 AM
Wonderful write Nette, especially the last line, congratulations...
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Date: 9/18/2017 12:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Nette.
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Date: 9/17/2017 5:43:00 PM
Thank you, Nette, for entering my contest. .... Congratulations on your win... Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 9/17/2017 3:13:00 PM
Congrats nette!
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Date: 9/10/2017 5:39:00 PM
Fascinating work which makes me feel the romp of summer!
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Date: 9/10/2017 5:34:00 PM
Those were the good ole younger days which your astounding poetry brightly conveyed!
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Date: 9/9/2017 9:03:00 PM
Nette, many lovely images! GL in contest!
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Date: 9/9/2017 12:36:00 PM
Well penned in beautiful words as always--good work--good luck nette!
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Date: 9/9/2017 11:27:00 AM
What a glorious and inspirational write my friend! You have surely written such a magnificent poem! I enjoyed your poem of running through puddles and playing in them, reminds me of my childhood Nette! I truly loved reading your delightful piece here this afternoon! What a tremendous poem, Great Work!
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Date: 9/9/2017 11:12:00 AM
nice! i actually saw some children playing in the puddles; well written and absorbing for that happy moment. cheers!
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