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Divine Intervention


Divine Intervention


Dear Dad…I plucked a crimson rose that lay
upon your grave, as icy rain fell down
and joined my warm, wet tears that winter day.
Unto my heart, I pressed it close to drown
my mournful thoughts and feelings deep inside.
And then I numbly made my way back home
to grieve and heal with loved ones by my side.
But soon they left, and I was all alone.

That night I placed the crimson rose within
a random place inside a book of prose,
and it pressed flat for quite some time therein.
One day I opened it to find I chose
the place that God directed me to lay
the rose in answer to my prayers of where
you were in death so that my heart could say
that everlasting life was yours to share.

What I had hoped I know for sure is true...  
for words within the page where that rose slept,
"The Grave," by Robert Blair...bodes life anew;
in God’s eternal life our souls are kept.
My keepsake rested in a book of prose...
God’s intervention was my only guide.
Mid secret pages dried your crimson rose...
God’s answer to my prayer…with thanks, I cried.


September 16, 2014

~1st Place~
Contest: Avatar
Sponsor: Line Gauthier
Judged: 12/16/2017
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Lawless Avatar
December 16, 2017 at 11:38 PM
Sandra, this is the first time i have had the pleasure of reading this beautiful poem. congrats on your placement in the contest
Roper Avatar
December 16, 2017 at 5:48 PM
Nicely done and inspiring write, Sandra,congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve~`*
Barden Avatar
December 16, 2017 at 6:01 AM
Loved this, Sandra, very poignant and heart-felt ... wonderful rhyme and rhythm - congrats on your win, my friend! :-) <3
Talbot Avatar
December 16, 2017 at 4:25 AM
Full of emotion, congratulations on your well-deserved win! Best forever wishes, Mick
Sinha-Roy Avatar
December 16, 2017 at 3:39 AM
Congrats Sandra for your great win with such an emotion-charged poem.
Gauthier Avatar
December 15, 2017 at 11:29 PM
Thank you so much for your warm touching and masterfully expressed entry. Lovely, Sandra. Congrats on your well deserved win.
Terry Avatar
September 9, 2015 at 4:13 PM
Hello Sandra. Your poem is very much worthy of first place and, thanks to being featured on the home page, came to my attention. You write of a sign from God and I am happy to see them everywhere, including your poem. Many people miss the signs but, if you slow down and keep your mind and heart open, you begin to notice them. Glad you were able to share this sign in a poem. Enjoyed this read. :) Janece
Haight Avatar
September 9, 2015 at 7:56 PM
Hello Janece, thank you so much for stopping by to read my poem. You are so right about believing that signs from God really do happen, and by keeping the mind and heart open, they will come. I have had some others besides the one in poem. Happy to hear you are one of the fortunate ones too. Thank you for your nice comment on my poem. Sandra
A  Avatar
September 8, 2015 at 11:43 AM
Sandra, Congratulations on having your poem featured on the home page. **SKAT**
Haight Avatar
September 9, 2015 at 2:32 PM
Thank you so much, Skat. I was honored they chose to feature it. Sandra
Nunez Avatar
August 23, 2015 at 12:29 PM
got me teary eyed on this one, Sandra. Congratulations! I miss you! I hope you are keeping well. hugs!
A. Sharma Avatar
August 20, 2015 at 12:46 AM
Congrats on ur awesome poem n win Sandra!
Carmack Avatar
August 19, 2015 at 10:43 AM
It has been a while since I have seen you in one of my contests. Glad to see you back with this excellent poem. Congrats and God Bless.
Haight Avatar
August 19, 2015 at 2:43 PM
Thank you so much for recognizing my poem with such a nice placement. It means a lot to me because it was about my dear Dad. I hope to be more active than I've been, and look forward to another contest of yours. Thanks again, Sandra
A  Avatar
August 19, 2015 at 1:50 AM
Wonderful Win... SKAT
Haight Avatar
August 19, 2015 at 2:44 PM
Thank you so much, Skat! Hugs, Sandra
Bordner Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 2:30 AM
Sandra, this poem is one of the greatest testaments of Divine Intervention I've ever encountered. Yours tears of gratitude brought immortality to my heart. Such a lovely confirmation of life ongoing in crimson eyes of love. J.A.B.
Haight Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 1:11 PM
Justin, thank you so much for your kind comments. It was an honor to place in your contest. Sandra
Allison Avatar
October 2, 2014 at 10:25 AM
I've never pressed a rose Sandra now I am tempted - you have told such a wonderful story I found it very emotional , congrats on your HM hugs Jan xxx
Haight Avatar
October 2, 2014 at 11:39 AM
Hi Jan, so glad you liked my poem -- how my rose landed in that book of prose was a true story. Flowers press very nicely between sheets of waxed paper inside a book. Thanks for your congratulations! Sandra
Mehta Avatar
October 2, 2014 at 5:51 AM
Nice write on God's intervention, Congrats, Sandra
Haight Avatar
October 2, 2014 at 8:47 AM
Thank you once again for your comment and congratulations. Sandra
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