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distracted by how things feel

the ball rolls does it hit the inside or the outside regardless I'm jolted it's all behind the field of vision to be a pinball wizard I'd need eyes in the back of my head or to sit on a cloud and observe a while you can roll with the punches but rolling with the ball seems very different maybe side by side to avoid getting squashed every rotation perhaps I'm misdirecting my attention now another flaw should I wish to be a pinball wizard

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Date: 11/28/2023 9:55:00 AM
Multiple thoughts here, and more than free verse - actually concrete/shape in both thought and form - magnetic emotionally!
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Date: 11/28/2023 10:00:00 AM
Thanks Craig, I added the shape as an afterthought - glad you liked it. :) :) :)
Date: 11/27/2023 6:08:00 AM
Love this one : )
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Date: 11/27/2023 7:51:00 AM
Thanks Corey - hope all going well and fame and fortune has arrived :)

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